Reviews for Faulty Occurrences
Hibird assassin chapter 8 . 2/23/2014
Update plzzzzzz
MemeLee chapter 8 . 1/25/2012
WHY U NO UPDATE?

Please update! It was getting exciting! T.T
asdf chapter 8 . 10/17/2011
even though it seems like its been 2 years since u updated, it would be really sad to see the story go to waste, please update, and don't give u on it!
add chapter 5 . 10/17/2011
the ending of chapter 5 was sooo freaking good, intense mr. and mrs. smith kind of spy suspense!
Shuzuka chapter 8 . 11/28/2010
Can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon please :)
yume229 chapter 8 . 9/26/2010
this fic is great! please continue it! please!
SleepytimeTea chapter 8 . 7/2/2010
Can you put spaces or something to show when the setting changes in the chapters? Like in the beginning of Ch. 2 when you put X's to show when the scene changed from Ryoma to Momo. Other than that, I haven't seen anything to mark scene changes and it is slightly confusing without them, so can you put them in?

Other than that, amazing fic! Please continue! (I like the little jealousy fits Atobe has, and Fuji plotting evilness with his cactus) _
NekoKaigara chapter 8 . 6/25/2009
Saa... i would say that this is definitely feels somewhat less, than the other chapters. The ending line is also a bit too melodramatic for me. I mean, they've only known each other a few months. I liked the part where Fuji calls his dad though. Anyway write more and update soon, I'll be waiting for it
lemon-and-chai2B chapter 8 . 6/22/2009
I LOVE the drama, so so so so much! So much angst, so much action, so much drama. The part with Atobe and with Fuji's father was so heart wrenching... all the parts with Tezuka were so adorable, but heart breaking too. NYA I'm such a sucker for this kind of story, thank you for such a long beautiful chapter, more soon please!
phoenixfirekitsune chapter 8 . 6/21/2009
Yay! We got some TezukaxFuji interaction in this chapter. The poor boys got hurt by Kirihara though. I can't wait for more! Update soon please!
Sileny chapter 8 . 6/21/2009
Fuji didn't seem too OOC. I think you did a good job with it. _

Although it makes me kind of wonder about Tezuka's wounds. I'm going to assume that he's going to get them treated at home?
SyuKunI XD chapter 8 . 6/21/2009
I'd hate to be in Fuji's shoes right now. Poor guy.

So, um.. I was wondering, is it gonna turn M soon? XD

Ahaha, that would be AWESOME.

Anyway, UPDATE soon!

C'mon, We're all cheering you on. WOOHOO!

I loved the TeFu moments. XD
SilverWhiteDragon chapter 8 . 6/20/2009
Err...this is probably a little late to be asking something like thing, but any chance you can throw Jirou with Atobe please? _ Jirou's just so adorable...and putting him with Atobe's just plain cute...XD Atobe's hands are going to be full with Jirou...especially the way he's a little clueless about things...XD

Love the TezuFuji parts so far...although...the lying tot he father part...urk...poor Fuji..I would've thought he'd be a better liar..but I suppose it's understandable...
lemon-and-chai2B chapter 7 . 5/15/2009
Awe, that was so cute, I loved their little date. XD LOL at Mizuki and mushrooms. I love the friendship between Yukimura and Fuji.
Aelendis chapter 7 . 5/11/2009
I like your fic ... and in this last chapter, i think is very funny when Tezuka is teasing by his grand-father
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