As always, an excellent story! I guess you're done with Nimb3rs, but I'm so very glad that I have what you have written. I assure you I will be rereading them many times! Thank you so much and God bless you!

This ia a very good story. I like the brothers working together and being supported of each other. Charlie was found to be more of a man than he expected and Don reflected this bravery. The Harrison brothers were a mirrored image of them but as the evil reflection and not the good. Very clever in your portrayal of this.

I really enjoyed reading this. The relationship between the two brothers was lovely to see. You had a lot of wonderfully beautiful language in this too. I gasped several times during this story, and flinched in dismay as well. Well done!

I like interaction between Charlie and Don. It's just like I would see in the show but never saw.

Thanks for that.

Doing this anon as I'd already reviewed the chapter. I reread the fic, and I remember on my first read through it just didn't click for me. Well, this time it did. It worked well and I enjoyed it as much as I've enjoyed your other stories. Maybe my issue has been reading in parts, rather than reading the whole.

Anyway, I really hope you've been working on some more fic. ;-)

Great chapter, it was an amazing end to the story, I'm glad Charlie was cancer-free. Nice work!

I hope Charlie's results will say he is cancer free. GReat chapter!

“You do that,” Don smiled, softly. “And while you’re at it, remember this. I may not be there in person, but I’m with you, Charlie, me and Smokey, all the way.”

I really liked that last line.

Great chapter!

He only hoped Charlie was strong enough, and that someday, his little brother might forgive him. He prayed then, there would be a someday, and that the heavens would grant them more time.

I hope there is a someday too. Great chapter! I love, love, love this story!

Amazing chapter. I'm off to read the next one now. :)

Oh God. I hope Don and and Charlie will both be okay. Great chapter!

omg! i loved it

Wow loved it, one of my favorite Numb3rs's stories now.

Thank you

Wonderful story Lisa. You did it again and raised the bar. I loved the two bears :-). It was nice t see Charlie taking his turn at being the hero instead of always being the victim. I'm doing another round of Numb3rs recs on Crack Van pretty soon and now I don't know wheter to rec Superheros or Benedictus. Thanks for the pleasure you give me.

I don't know; that might be a good sight to see! ;)

Nice job on the much-needed talk between the brothers. They really needed to clear the air between them.

I loved this part:

"Who would have thought it – he didn’t stand a hope in hell.

His loving girlfriend and doting father.

They’d created an unholy alliance formed solely to keep him in line"

Great story.