very nice story, please you should right a longer story perhaps a sequel?

It doesn't seem to be killing me to leave a review...so I'll go.

Good points

-No blatantly obvious errors in grammar or spelling.

-Good ending pace.

Bad Points

-“Did you really mean that?” Seems like it should be spaced downward from that little string of sentences it is next to and/or have an indication of speaker. I'm pretty sure it was Sain who was speaking, but, hey. I've been wrong.

Well, that didn't ki- *explodes*

Hm... Sain...and...Florina? One of the better Sain pairings(but to be quite honest, Sain can work with nearly any female character given a chance.) As a Staunch Sain Supporter, I humbly ask you write moar Sain fics.

The only real gripe I have( which is to say, something I had to think up of because you probably want some criticism) is the ending...if felt somewhat rushed, but seeing that it is a oneshot...I suppose it is acceptable.

ChI

Well written, and I loved it -.

good , there i just said more words than i ever use in a day. heres your review, good story by the way.

That was very lovely. Yay for crack pairings! But I could see that one happening. She is on his support conversation list. It's definitely believable. You also have a good plotline to work off of. I should get into this fandom more than I am. It's pretty sweet. FE was like one of the greatest games ever invented. Thanks for the great fic! -KG

Someone pointed me this direction. So here I am. Sorry in advance if my review is a tad lame...

Poor Florina's frozen fingers. Traveling in the wintertime would definitely suck.

Rebecca's so cute. She was totally in character shoving Wil out of the tent.

[his boats] You mean "boots".

[caviler’s smile] "cavalier's"

[stanch] staunch is what you meant, I think.

This was a cute li'l 'fic. Rebecca jabbing Sain in the stomach was pretty epic. She would totally do that. Anyway, keep writing. ]

Cheers,

-Manna

PS. Yeah, SainxFlorina isn't really a crack pairing anymore since it's so common. Now something like FlorinaxMatthew would be since I don't think they even talk in-game.

It's not exactly a crack pairing. Not canon either, but it's definitely not crack. In fact, there's a whole C2 community devoted to this pairing.

Anyway, very nicely done. I definitely enjoyed it. Though there were to spelling errors I noticed. When you first describe the bandit, you spelled "boots" wrong, replacing one of the o's with an a. The next was pretty much the same, except with the word "steel".

Well done, and I wish you luck on the rest of your works.

It was very good. Keep on writing!

Really good. But would argue SainxFlorina isn't really a crack pairing

A review for you, my lilac!

I loved your story, it was a very good length for a 1-shot. Not too short, but not too long. I loved the pairing, and you did it very well. Keep writing!

From, Jordan