Having read your WE main stories I was expecting a good enjoyable read. What I and everyone else that has read this story received is an incredible in-depth portrayal of Sunny and Sides. I’ve thoroughly enjoyed reading this thank you for the work you’ve put into the whole WE series.

Wow... just wow... Awesome first chapter!

This story is awesome. I am wondering when you will update because I love this story. I want to read what happens next

wow never have i been glad not to have a dumb bubbly sibling. Great story though! Kinda feel like while sunstreaker may be plain on the outside sideswipe may be mentally retarded.

Yep Sides, keep away from Jazz.

Nice twins! Great start!

Aww! i know you haven't updated, but this is a terrible cliffhanger. :) :)

Hi there. I've been reading your fic for awhile now, but not since you started posting chapters. I felt this one was the most appropriate, though (13. Chapter 8) because of Wildride and Blindside's argument over whether or not they should re-program Sunstreaker because of his "anger issues".
It's relevant to me because my brothers and I are home-schooled, and both of them (at least) have Asperger's syndrome. And in case you're not familiar with what Asperger's is, people who have it are usually off in their own little worlds, (and are thus usually very creative) but have difficulty interacting with others. Sometimes they have such difficulty in expressing themselves that they just give up and never say anything.

Well to get to the point my Mom was reading about a study some scientists did that showed that when a certain kind of bacteria is not present in a person's digestive tract, they 1) have Asperger's and 2) thus have difficulty interacting socially with others. So, scientists hypothesized that if one were to add this bacteria to an Asperger's digestive tract, they would maybe have less difficulty socializing.
Anyway, when one of my brothers heard that, he stated vehemently that he did not want to have the bacterium "administered" to him. That he, like Wildride, did not want to have a part of himself changed.
So. I don't know if you were maybe homeschooled or if you already know about Asperger's (and if you do please forgive my prattle), but I think you did a very good job of portraying it. Or something like it :) I think your story is very good and I like it a lot. Please keep writing! (Sorry for the maybe not very interesting to you review.)

You really need to continue this!

AWW! THAT IS SO CUTE!

Holy wow. This story is beyond words. The way you characterize Sideswipe and Sunstreaker is amazing. Sometimes I want to go 'aww' and other times I want to laugh until my sides hurt (which I have done reading this fic, by the way.)

I'm really interested as to the whole ghost mystery going on. No One is one of my favorite characters, just for the amount that he confuses me and makes me want to learn more. Every unexplained thing that happens to the characters peaks my interest more and more, which was why I was slightly let down to discover that this was the end. I hope you can find the inspiration to continue this.

Thank you for this story. The plot feels like an authentic novel, and the characters feel like real people with real flaws and quirks.

“Fairy tales are more than true: not because they tell us that dragons exist, but because they tell us that dragons can be beaten.” -Neil Gorman

Your story is not real, which means it is more real than you or me. It's truer than true, because there are things that stories that aren't true can say that words alone cannot. So thank you, Hearts of Eternity, for the Surface of the Sun.

Until all are one. : )

Hey! Just want to say how much I love this story. It's extremely well written, adn I absolutely love the characterization for Sunstreaker and Sideswipe, as well as their backstory. It's an interesting view on their personalities. This is by far one of the best stories about the Twins I've read, so great job! I really do hope you keep writing, but no matter the case, I really appreciate the time you took to write this. Thanks!

I laughed so hard during the twins summersaulting lesson and then later with Ratchet, Barricade and Jetfire when they trued again and the mechs were so confused I was dying I had tears in my eyes and everything

THIS IS SO CUTE

Poor Whistler.
Please write more?