I need more you can't leave me wanting more

aw! (:

I love the ending,

lol Kenny and Wendy! xD

AWESOME!

please keep up the great work

Please tell you're gonna do a story for Tweek and Craig. Please! I love those two together.

haha, aww! cute! go style and creek! :D

Hey dude, way to go on your first South Park fanfic (I believe this is your first?) Great pick for the pairing...Style's always been a favorite of mine

Good ending.

Wow when I reviewed for the last chapter I didn't realize there were more chapters. Sorry about that. Great so far by the way.

Why does it say this story is complete? It would be pretty weird to end it there.

that was amazing cute i loved it! favoriting

Haha oh my god I loved the ending! The ending was like, crazyness dude! I love how it said "Secret POV" haha. "Operation Style is go," Wow that was awesome!

When you said in the previous chapter that Stan was in an accident I was like AH! Because Stan is my love, and I hate to see him hurt! I can't stand those fanfics where he gets killed or commits suicide... it's very un-Stan-like, if you get me.

I'm pretty sure that (according to your profile stories) this is your first South Park fanfic! I, as an unbiased outsider, give you advice because there is ALWAYS room for improvement: Read more books! Read more fanfics! Different people's writing styles will influence your own! I know this as a fact, for I have experienced with it ]]

By the way, totally disregard Pillar of Winter's flame. He uses that SAME FLAME for everything. He actually copied some flames that people flamed him with and made them his own. He can be nice, he give me nice reviews, but sometimes everybody gets a little out of it! So don't worry about it. ]]

Keep writing!

While it is true that there are some spelling errors scattered about, I thoroughly enjoyed this story overall, and will not go out of my way to make you feel bad about its few faults.

These chapters were good ]]

I love Kenny in some fanfics where he is totally omniciant. When he just KNOWS everything. I don't know why we perceive him to be that way, but it definitly is very entertaining!

Another classic Style fic... I used to hate them but now I'm getting used to them. There are just so many!

I liked how you had both of their thoughts for the first and second chapters. It's nice to know both of their insight on the issue at hand. Too bad the other one doesn't know that the one they like feels exactly the same way!

Keep writing!

How serendipitous for you that I happened upon your story! You are about to receive one of my more creative flames, written from the copious amount of words which people suggested for my flame-writing challenge. After all, one can only use a copy-paste flame for so long before it becomes trite, right?

Right.

Now, before I crack my knuckles and begin, I certainly hope you don’t suffer from katagelophobia as I’m about to flame this disastrous fiasco you call a story, or from triskaidekaphobia as this sentence will end with the number 13.

I wish I could tell you that you didn’t have superfluous spelling errors or that your loathsome grammar didn’t make me cringe. I wish I could tell you that your plot wasn’t turbid and your characters banal. And I also wish I could work the word antidisestablishmentarianism into this flame….but, alas, I can’t do any of those things.

Now, perhaps there is an excuse for you posting this irredeemable excrement. Maybe you were drunk on a few strawberry daiquiris, or maybe you were even attacked by a bevy of flailing birds when you were younger, thus causing a permanent writing-related affliction. Or perhaps your computer was hijacked by a crank-addicted Sasquatch or a monkey whose loose sphincter and love of broccoli causes an aeruginous effluvium wherever he goes.

Whatever the excuse, it doesn’t make your story inscrutable to honest feedback like this:

I would rather attend a hoedown where inbred midgets caterwaul and perform fouettes while some guy named Jed plays the piano with an unmentionable body part than read any more of this pitiful abomination you call a story. I would rather be forced to participate in the domestication of rabid chupacabras than read one more sentence of your crap. I would even rather have an internship with Microsoft where I have to juxtapose logarithms for no reason and answer questions in pig-Latin about misconfigurations or network error messages all day.

I wish I could have faith that you will have an epiphany from this and produce a copasetic story, or that you’ll become obsequious to the fundamentals of the English language, but I think my left testicle will become a famous daredevil who competes in monster truck races before that happens. In other words: as a writer, you fail.

Best regards,

Pillar Of Winter