Sequel!

Oh gosh, reading this made me so happy! I had a goofy grin I think as I read this.
Such lovely writing! So, thank you for putting this up!

Aw... such a great short story! Loved it! Thanks for writing and posting!

That was sooooo cute, I love the weapons Marlene used to deal with the monsters. This fic really made me laugh, and I love the Marlene x Vincent moments!

Ahhhhhhh, this was epic. Gud job! I like the idea of trained Nibel wolves. Sounds like they'd be awesome guardians. :)

Aww, this was so cute. I liked that Marlene helped to put a smile on Vincent's face. Gods know he needed it. I love Chaos. He's such a big softy...unless you get on his bad side lol

SOOO CUTE! XD

Squee! too cute. Is there a Spring time version where Marlene goes back to the mansion to visit the "basement monster" and Vincent? If so, can you tell me the name of it? Sound's too cute. Thanks for the cute Chaos fluff story.

LOL SOOOOO CUTE! .

Awww! This is so adorable! :D I'll bet Vincent would make an awesome dad. :)

That was to cute for words. I love when marline make vinnny come out of his shell.

Perfectly adorable!

What a beautiful story. It made me smile D

Thanks for the read

-Blooming D.

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This story was utterly adorable. I love how you portrayed Vincent and Marlene's relationship and Chaos the basement monster made me laugh. This story was amazing, keep up the great work.

Alright, I'm going to be totally honest. I LOVED this story! It was so cute, ever since the Advent Children scene with Marlene running under Vincent's cloak, I have absolutely adored any story with these two interacting! The way you had Vincent slowly soften to going along with Marlene's ideas, as well as with Chaos, was just perfectly executed. This is amazing well-written, thank you.