I liked your fic. It was fairly exciting and not cliche. Your grammar, spelling, and fragmented sentences, however, really detracted from the overall effect. Without the mistakes, I could have read the story as smoothly as it was meant to be read, and if I could have done so, this story would have done quite a good job of approximating an actual NC0 episode.

great story nice to see someone with the same ideals about zoids being M/F

DIE, KEM! JAMIE IS MINE! *chases after Kem's Raynos in the pink Liger Zero* TAKE THAT! AND THAT!

Nice fanfic about Jamie. *smiles cheerfully* I feel good Jamie has a lover! *blows a smily face horn* I will summon... *a Berserk Fury emerges from the earth* Huh? Your not a tiger/lion zoid! *Berserk Fury has a sweatdrop* But... I REALY NEED TO GO! *jumps up onto Berserk Fury* Onward! *the Berserk Fury trots off into the sunset* Buh bye! *waves cheerfully*

I love the Raynos! Yey! Jamie is so smart n-n; Great job staying in character *wink* _o;

Wai! It's Jamie! (Or is it Jemmy?) I have a thing for neglected characters... *cough* Anyway! As stated before, this is very true to the show, but more description and a more complex plot woulda been betta. It's just that the only thing special about this is the strength of the team and a few things in the battle, maybe it'd be better with more plot, just a bettle isn't much to mention.

It was good

Great story! Nice to see one that actually focuses on action, instead of slipping into the easier "romance" category. My one problem is that you used the spelling "Jamie." While it seems everyone else writing Zoids fics are using the same spelling, if you go to any Zoids site, it's clearly spelt "Jemmy."

COOL! MORE! PLEASE? I really like this. Either another chap. is in order or a sequal.

alrite! another Zoids ficcy! by the way, i wrote to and they said the Zoids colum should be up soon! So we can all post our Zoid ficcies there! YAY! _

Nothing beats good 'ol sky dogfighting scenes. _ Enjoyed the story!

Yay! That was pretty good! _ Jamie's cool. I like the Raynos. Leena's betta though! She's my favi char! _ Anyway, could you do me a favor? Can you read my fanfic too? PWEASE? All ye hafta do if click on me name and then look fer Zoids: Gun Sniper Nightmare. Please R&R! And continue as well! ::bows and runs away::

Hey I really like your fic so far! Its really great! Please, I hope you continue it! I though must say, the one thing I noticed right away throughout your fic was that it sounded JUST like the show! I loved it, you said everything they would say and how they act. It was great _ Loved it. Please continue! I really want to know whats gonna happen to Jamie and the others. Please conitinue! You can't leave a great fanfic unfinished _ ::winks::