Forget this.

Thanks for sharing.

I though this was great.

This is written like a poorly scripted play.
I'm going to stop reading.

pretty excellent story it sad to see that it is over

Really good story did not want to stop reading but sad it came to end it was good

You misspelled 'brewed'.

love it

:p

The idea for this story is really good, and I'm liking the characterizations so far.

However, you should probably get a beta-reader to clean up your spelling and grammar mistakes. This story is littered with spelling mistakes that make it difficult to read at times, because one has to stop in order to figure out what word you're trying to use.

Other than that, it's a good story.

i love this story but i would have actually swapped the couples, i would have put remus with lucius and harry with severus but otherwise great work

Poor Hannah I hope she finds a nice guy soon

I love your story. I wish that Lucius and Harry have another son after Marcus because he have two titles to pass on to. ) Well, of course, Marcus can carry both like Harry but i can dream, can't i? Besides, i dont like girls carrying titles even though i am a girl Girls marry and they change their surnames most of the time. And they oftentimes give the title to the men they married but im all for keeping it in the family anyway. )

I still say that Snape got off lightly. And i dont agree with Harry lying to Remus about Snape's culpability. Honesty is a good thing for a young relationship and i still think that Snape has to suffer a bit more...like the breaking friendship of Remus. Because what they did was horrible but at least, Lucius was paying for it. Harry might have been game but he was 17!

Both. Both! BOTH!

there aren't enough harry/voldemort pairings in the world of fanfiction, do you think you could come up with one? thanks