Hilarious

That ending though ZD I had a heart attack for a second :D

loved it, especially how you played near. expert delivery transitioning their rigid, cold detective personalities into relaxed, post-series casual ones. I especially enjoyed your writing style and inner monologuing done by mello (reminded me of andy weir tbh lol) I can only hope you've kept writing since this piece (I have yet to check out anything else written by you), you have a lot of talent my friend!

Oh God, every time I read this story I howl with laughter the whole way through. Damn skippy it's amazeballs.

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

D'awwwww! :)

XD

For fuck's sake, that was amazing. I loved it. AND THE ENDING. I really enjoyed reading, thank you for writing it (:

That was ducking adorable. Bravo, sir. You did well!

Pretty sure I read this awhile back, but never got around to reviewing it... sorry about that... but better late than never i suppose... still feel bad... Anyway loved this fic; it really is brilliant. Especially considering i kinda, sorta don't like Near sometimes, but every time he did something clever or funny, I was cheering for him and when he told Mello he should get Matt drunk and kiss him, I was screaming for Mells to just do it! And oh my gosh those last three lines had me laughing until I cried! Sorry I tend to ramble... Thanks for writing/providing me with terrific things to read! Hope to read more!

Brilliant :D

Excellent! Absolutely excellent! Every analogy was flawless and the constant humor and romance made it a delight to read! 5/5! :)

Hahahaahah you have a talent for writing funny, original jokes xD This fic was brilliant! Hot and funny and...heartwarming! And I really think everyone was in character! Well done!

this fanfic is great! :) it's been soo cute! -
haha xD and I almost started crying as you wrote that they got hit by a bus xD ... that's something you shouldn't joke about xP
anyways... I really love this fanfic! great job :D

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Hey there, I'm not sure if I've reviewed this before. I decided to drop a review anyway and tell you that after a couple years of reading as many as I can get my hands on, this is still my favorite MM fic. It's beautifully written and captures everyone's personalities just right. Sometimes it's hard to make it fluffy without making the boys - especially Matt - out of character; as far as I'm concerned, you did it perfectly. It was a very satisfying read.

Sorry I don't have more to say. There's nothing to criticize.

Wings xx