Very unusual and pretty story! :)

Wow.
Saw the continuation on Facebook and it had me intrigued, so I decided to read this first.
Loved it.

that was so cute I really liked and his expression when she said no to being his valentine she wanted to be his pop tart great

very cute

Ohhh this was precious and i cant wait to read the extended version of this! Makes me soo happy! Lol! Just you wait!
-A

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaw.
Really a ten on the scale of sweetnes.
1 is bitter
2 is boring
3 is platonic
4 is getting better
5 is bearable
6 is nice
7 is strawberry
8 is suggar
9 is suggar and strawberry's
10 is 'you just gave me diabetes!'

I am in awe with your combined genius! Completely both amazing and amusing! The witty exchanges of your characters define the infinite and excellent "brains" behind the pens (or keyboard). I look forward to reading the multi-chapter of this story!

Hello. Such a sweet, wonderful story! (I love strawberry poptarts too!) But one question: what did Edward do for a living? He said he was surrounded by beautiful things and people with no substance inside. And she knew his name, it was in the media, but I'm still wondering what he really did? Thanks, Suzan Noerr

I loved it!

I couldn't help but smile the whole time I was reading it.

Bella's take on True Love is definitely very original... yet so very true. What's even better, I love Strawberry Pop Tarts!

Off to go read the extended version now!

Thank you both for writing such a wonderful O/S!

xx

There is such anticipation in this story. It's compelling and all-encompassing in the best possible way, like the thrill of a roller coaster but without the fear of falling.

Your succinctness is awe-inspiring. You say so much with so few words. So powerful. So emotional. It's truly impressive.

I loved both characters; two lost souls who are looking for something real in a world of falseness and pretense. His gesture are so much more than romantic. They're genuine and sincere and thoughtful to a fault. All she has to do is accept them, except putting one's self out there, being vulnerable and allowing someone else to see you, really see you, is one of the hardest things to do. She manages to do it as if it were the easiest and maybe the only choice. She's amazing.

Thank you for another wonderful story!

Aw, that was cute. At first I was like...

wtf? no? then i was like oh :D

great job!

Best. Thing. Ever.

Seriously, my face hurts from smiling like a loon. After I finish this, I am going to read the extended fic.

LOVED IT!

wonderfully romantic...thank you...:)

omg i love this im going to go read the full length version now! loved the additional audrey hepburn film reference, sabrina is my all time favourite film!