| Reviews for PE |
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  Guest chapter 30 . 7/4 Brilliant, brilliant writing. |
 Archer5210 chapter 30 . 6/13 I love it. AND I want a sequel. NOW. RIGHT NOW! |
| elijahlover chapter 30 . 5/22 I’ve really enjoyed reading this! Congrats on an awesome fic :) |
| rgjflood chapter 4 . 4/22 What language do you use for old narnia? |
| Anna R chapter 11 . 3/1 Lamp is perfect, we love Coach Hamilton PS sleeping Edmund is gorgeous, we definitely need more of him :) |
| Anna R chapter 9 . 3/1 "eat your salt" XD Blessings. So good |
| Anna R chapter 8 . 3/1 I just noticed that all your chapter titles are P.E. and I think that's really cool 3 |
| Anna R chapter 5 . 3/1 I wasn't going to be this picky, but you said you welcome picky reviews, so here it is. "I blinked, them moved hesitantly" (right as Aslan heals Edmund's legs) should be "then moved hesitantly" That's all I caught. This story is shaping up to be very powerful, I like it a lot! Did you make up your Old Narnian language? |
| Sasha chapter 5 . 11/1/2019 Just dropping by to say this specific chapter, in particular the 'special treatment' of Edmund, has taken hold in my own head-canon very firmly. I still find myself startled every so often when a story mentions his rescue, and doesn't mention him being so injured, before I recall myself. Every so often, I find myself compelled to drop by and reread this chapter. Thanks for writing it! |
| Admiral T. DeVanto chapter 28 . 7/24/2019 I love that ending! The introduction to their dad had me liking him from the start! |
| Admiral T. DeVanto chapter 23 . 7/24/2019 And that the King was His Son. Darn right he is! |
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/21/2019 *WARNING: SPOILER AHEAD!* Yeah. I've stopped reading it after skipping to chap 30 and read that all 4's dead. I really don't want to continue with knowing that some characters (if indeed they are talking about a different group of characters than the ones I am thinking of) that I grow to like keels over at the end. And being that I already "love" (because these are fictional characters we're talking about) the Pensivie syblings; it would suck to imagine them dying (props to a very good author that gives bad endings and also to an overactive imagination of mine) |
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/21/2019 This is a freakin huge chapter (NotthatImind!) But it's kinda 12:52 as of the moment and all I wanna know is if this story has a happy ending and nobody but the snake dying... |
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/21/2019 Is your last name Horast by anychance? Prounounced "Or"-"Ray"? You seriously remind me of him |
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/21/2019 I do NOT like this Collins character. Unless my senses mistake me, he screams "badguy" |
