I don't know who you are, but if you wrote this as an 8th grader, then hope you became a famous writer because this is excellently written for someone of such youth. I will be reading more of your work. Thank you for sharing.

Aro is getting a total kick out of this drama and my laying on my bed dying of soundless laughter with my eyes are tearing up.

Poor Laurent, sucks to be him!

You mean Celsius right? Because at 29 degrees Fahrenheit, girl would be a block of frozen solid. Even at 29 Celsius she would have stopped shivering and started showing moderate symptoms of Hypothermia and even lower temps she could have slipped into a coma and eventually death. I mean who cares at this point in time anyways. Just some food for thought.

Bella should end up hooking up with a version of Fleur from HP who randomly cast some weird ass spell that brought her to vampire world, but plot twist, she ends up with Vic. . . .Neither common or expected.

That was great! Especially for a 13 yo! Really enjoyed it, thanks

J'ai adoré. Merci..
(le français était parfait, ahh google traduction xD)

It's a rather nice story even if it does have a bit too much drama for my tastes... However in the future it is probably not a good idea to rant about hating your own characters in ANs, it just makes everything weird

Interesting...

Seems she just found her true mate?

why does no one want Bella and Esme? ESME IS BAE!... Sorry for sounding so illiterate, but Esme should have been poll option number uno!... Think about it! xD

What will she do when she arrives and finds that the one she hates has shattered the soul of his ''Love'' just as her's has been?

Seriously, why do you think this needs a sequel? Are you going to add 20 chapters of nothingness into it like this one? Will it have notes from you saying how you hate Bella and Victoria while writing about them?

Go look up the definition of mediocre and you will see a link to this story.

Still my favorite Twilight fic!