good story. it decent

wow Albus wow! He is so annoying.

albus bashing here. lol

why harry nit stay with Malfoy?

i dont know why albus tale harry to Weasley, if not to petunia for protection then what the point?

This chapter was so packed with suspense, I couldn't bear to read it yesterday. lol I couldn't stay away today.

Bad Ron!

Can I castrated the old coot?! So, he wouldn't take Harry away from Severus? Please let me castrated him! Slowly and painfully! grrrrr..

I would think that Snape would be steaming mad to know that Dumbledore had known about the abuse and did nothing. Snape is not showing much of his usual tendencies toward anger.

Friend not fiend!
I think fiend means enemy or something!
Other than that it is good!

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This was a nice family fic. I actually fell in love with Uncle Luc and Aunt Cissy for some reason. :D

Hmm so Harry is at the stage where he can hug people, even males. Harry also feels comfortable enough to call the manor "home". How in the world does that mean that all the progress that has been made has been washed away?

This story brings me a bit of sorrow, because you have written the child in pain so well.
Severus' part is very small, as compared to the Malfoys.
Doesn't that alter the tenor of the story a lot? He is the main parent, and his personal power and charisma is not so slight.
A flaw, linquistically speaking: ''Albus moved towards the boy... ''..you'll be arrested Anyways.''
A.D. is a highly intelligent, upper class, extremly educated, elderly, British Wizard, at least 100 years older than the American, teen-school years, of lower education, who might say : '' anyways.'' and seem natural. His education is equal to Harvard, Eton or Harrow, and his speech always reflects this fact. ''Manners makyth Man'': the motto of William of Wykeham
So , this speech defect is not Dumbledore, however much of a villain, he is turning into.
Villains do not lose their eduction, they misuse it.
Reading on.
It simply doesn't fit the persona., nor would chewing gum, or taking drugs.
Different characters have differing speech.
Alas, you are not the only author on this net to make this mistake, but it causes the reader abruptly to fall out of the magic sphere, in which the story blooms and thrives.
Happy New Year to you.

any normal parent would leave the school especiallly if they had other options