It actually was a very fitting way to end the story, and I applaud you for it. I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Thank you for writing it and have a great day.

Well, that was, yeah. I like it. This story is good. It would have been more of a roller caoster of emotion if I didnt know that Shawn lives, but honestly, after endgame, I don't think I can take another death, even if it isnt canon.

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Good writing. I was entranced this whole chapter and the ending was brilliant.

And so the plot thickens

I love this story

This chapter ended with me smiling softly and a sense of piece. (even uf it feels a bit like the calm before the storm)

Lassiter asking about the pineapples Shawn gets from the pharmacy and if he got food poisoning is great. It's not like I expected him to betray Shawn's trust like that but still.

Also, if Chief Vick, Lassiter, Gus, and or Juliet don't make sure that Truman and Lawrence's badges are taken away then I will write a fanfic about it where they get what's coming to them. (Not that I don't enjoy Shawn whump, it's just sometimes the people hurting him happen to be ones that I already don't like and yeah, they hurt Shawn snd that isnt , I know it's a contradiction but you know what I mean. Maybe. Hopefully.)

okay, but every thing about this chapter is perfect.

Well, none of this is concerning. Not at all. Not one bit.

favorite chapter yet.

Yes! I love it! Even the evil doctor guy.

I love both Shawn and Gus equally. I personally don't get why the flouxitine is a big deal to Shawn, as I personally don't care either way, bit to each his own. Anyways, so the fact that I am still not sure if Shawn is actually turning psychic or not is what is driving me to keep reading. (I will probably end up spending the next however many hours reading this and the sequel that I saw, bit didnt start reading, before this. So, yeah, please be kind to my children.)

I very much like this. (Sorry I am not saying much at all in my reviews. I just forget everything I want to say by the time I get to the end of the chapter. No matter howvlong or short the chaoter is.)

I like it