Gosh, that ending was so sweet. Love that Haley came with Jack

This is absolutely great? I love how competent, empathic and engaging this story was - all the BAUfeels and the different way people look at the events - and of course how precious Hotch is, and how much they all love and respect him - again, each in their own personal way. Such a great job, and the feelings it gave me will always stay with me.

This was so good!

Well done. Characterizations are consistent and plot is compelling. I found the pacing a little slow, but enjoyed the story very much!

Great story! It really tugged at my heartstrings. A favorite!

Vraiment une bonne histoire !
J'adore comment tu as mené la blessure de Hotch. Son intervention à la fenêtre est purement génial !

Hey, absolutely loved this story, it was great :) what's the title of the sequel? (if there is one) it'd be great to hear from you thanks :)

I truly enjoyed this beautiful story! Besides a few grammar errors (which I will let slide due to English being your second language), this was perfect! I know this is somewhat of an older story, but I'm going to put it on my favorites list nonetheless.

The characterizations were flawless, and I loved how Morgan had to take the lead. Now that we've seen seasons 4, 5, and 6, you can see how much you unknowingly foreshadowed at the time that you wrote this. Amazing!

Much love,

Shelby

A great Story.

When I started out reading CM fanfic I started out with Morgan/Garcia (because of their chemistry on the show) and discovered a few good case-fics and some in-depth stories like this one. Of that last category, this was truly brilliant and I will make sure to read the sequel!

I am an avid Hotch Prentiss shipper but the lack of romance in your stories does not bother me at all. Romance like H/P or M/G will never be on the show but solely within my own Criminal Mind (though one can have a glimmer of hope LOL) and so stories like these are way more realistic.

So thank you for a great read. I will start the sequel tonight as RL is calling out to me now.

C.

Great story!

I can’t believe I never reviewed this! This was a very riveting story, and you had me on the edge of my seat. The images I had in my head where so perfect, and you gave great detail in bringing the story to life.

I could picture the team standing in horror, knowing two of their own is in the hands of two brothers who want to see them dead. Hotch was so Hotch, and Rossi I love that man. As Hotch got weaker, yet still maintaining his control and still being the leader of his team even in dire situation. I absolutely loved this story and do hope you write another one as good as this! Keep up the beautiful writing, and I’ll be waiting for more from you!

Wow again! I gather this was he 'prequel' so to speak for The Fallen? Great job with Hotch and Rossi and at the end with Haley finally realizing that the people Hotch works with are more than just co-workers but are his friends and family.

Great fic and really well written.

For English not being your first language, You did an amazing job.

This is a great story.

Gotta love the stubborn Hotch.