LOL, very cute and humorous! My favorite part is when Edmund & Peter started dancing randomly on the dance floor so they could get closer to Susan. Good job!

Oh Gosh my stomach hurts from laughing!
That was amazing, its been such a long time since a fanfic made me laugh so hard. Everything was hilarious from the beginning right up to the end.
You, my friend are gifted.

Lol, random dance
Lollololol

The most hilarious and random collection of randomness and hilariousness.

haha that was really funny ! XD

I laughed my ass off hahaha :)

~Destrier~ :D x

'doubling over with insane continuous laughter' I couldn't breathe I was laughing so hard!

This was really funny.

Congratulations, you just won the Random Hilarious Story Contest. Rabadash with lighter skin and hair gel... I snickered the whole way through.

It was funny. You succeed in every story. :)

Dear Lucy Crewe, I laughed SO much! Thanks again! Your stories are always great!

"I would like to thank everyone I've ever met...by name." LOL.

That was so funny! I didn't think anyone was particularly OOC...

Great job! )

Sincerely,

Cassidy S.

hilarious I couldn't stop laughing

goofy, being a relative term, it was seriously a crazy funny story, how can you not notice a little girl in the back seat? and one line that made me laugh so hard even if i dont know why? its this: over my dead body... i can just imagine his face as he said this... hahaha

awesome!

Hilarious! Poor little Lucy, forgotten until the end...

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