Please update soon!

**this helps me by shielding you from your little pixie friend's gift.**

A HA! I knew it!

Bella scratching herself to disrupt the image cut into her should was quite clever. I would never have thought of that.

**Neither of us hesitated - we immediately went to find her.**

I understand why they would rush off immediately, but I sure hope they make a call while on their way to Roy, even if Carlisle/Esme stay behind, surely Emmett/Rosalie would follow to help Edward & Alice. Right?

great new chap...

hope bella doesnt die

or maybe you should put her in a extreme condition so you can tranforme her

good story.

this story is so good! can't wait for more! :)

it seems great

i will wait to continue reading

Finish. The. Story.

Before I go insane. Please?

Really good, you got the characters down pat.

You have to write more. Pretty please with a cherry on top. Wow I haven't said that since I was five. So write more!

I love your story! You are the best storyteller that has ever lived! You rock!

Oh, you evil woman; torturing poor Edward like that! I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up! ]

very powerful cliffhanger!

Hey,

I really like your writing style, very sophisicated, and eloquent.

Hope to see more of this story soon!

Keep up the good work

sarahx

well there wouldn't be a story if she died just like that.

i love the damsel in distress stories)

Your doing a really good job with your writing. So many stories try to do Edward and Bella and it just doesn't feel like them but yours does. Keep up the good work. It's really interesting. Can't wait to read more.

I really like what you have done so far. It feels just like I'm reading a newly discovered "long lost chapter" of the real books. :) I'm surprised no one figured out yet who kidnapped them. I'm pretty certain I know who it, assuming you're not trying to trick us. But I won't say it because I know there are people who like to be surprised.