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wow this is a very good story, you kept Kakuzu in character during the whole thing. well done :)

really cute you did a great job!

is dis a cliffy end?

lolz. Snarky...I love that word. If you google it you really do find the definition...just as Dane Cook said. DANE COOK IS ONE FUNNY BITCH! He says so himself. (he did...in one of the whatchacallits...)

I like the story quite a bit, but two things...

1) NEVER FORGET KAKUZU'S STITCHES!

2) I don't like the term 'imprinting'. It makes them sound
like machines.

This bad monday thing reminds me of Garfield and his hatred of mondays.

I like how everytime the word 'ass' is used, you use dollar signs instead of s'.

Her name means something along the lines of shadow angel doesn't it? Mind you, Im just starting thus story.

Wow! I couldn't stop reading this story once I began reading it! I'm going to read the sequal to this as soon as I finish this review. :)

I probably should have reviewed each chapter, but I was really wanting to find out what happened next. The suspense was killing me after every chapter.

Great story and I loved Nari and Santai. Very funny characters! Keep up the wonderful work.

i hate mondays (

At the line Kakuzu jumps like I burned kicked down the door and pulles out a pointy thing,pointing it around' I laughed so HARD I cried (then had to chang my shorts.);

IT WAS SO FUNNY!:3

OH NOES! Watch out Kumori!

this is extremely close to Twilight series...

But I still like it.

ahh! Go ChapterKakuzu! DIE OROCHMARU!

Wow, that certainly took a wierd turn (not in a bad way) And Kumori's going back to Kakuzu? FINALLY! One more thing... (Snaps Kakuzu and Kumori's cancer sticks) Stop that! It's bad for you