Reviews for Foolproof |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story! What happened to the future chapter you mentioned!? I was so disappointed that its never been posted. |
![]() ![]() I want to read what happened next. Please let me know if there is a later years story. Loved the story by the way. Only thing I would have liked better is more if them together so I want more of the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Bells, it's okay really…it's worse than it looks" hahaha...I think you/he meant to say that it looks worse than it is (if he's lying to make her feel better). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Could this idiot be any more of a hypocrite? All these years he's been going to other girls to get what he didn't want from Bella and the minute she starts doing the same he starts whining like a four year old. What a prick! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm definitely interested in your continued version of their lives xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() What about what Edward did with Lauren - that was cruel and they're not even going to address it. I don't like weak/whiny!Bella. I like my female leads strong and sassy. Sorry! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful story and I loved every page. The ending wad different, but that'swhat makes your story so unique. Thank you for sharing this with us. |
![]() ![]() This chapter easy horn and little sad at the sometime. wake up Bella, you have the guy. You know whatvyou'verve always wanted? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just found this story. If you still have a few years down the road I would like to read it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahh loved it all! pleaaseeeeee write a sequal ! |
![]() ![]() this is so fucking wrong. they're telling her that she did nothing wrong and she did. she chose jake over everyone else. she knows she did something wrong but not the right reasons. |
![]() ![]() bella is so fucking stupid. i hate her |
![]() ![]() ![]() yes yes yes yes yes, post the sequel thingy. pretty please with a edward on top! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would love to read the sort if squeal you were going on about, I liked this story it was really good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the epilogue! Great story! |