| Reviews for Mistakes |
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   NCIS-Kingdom chapter 9 . 5/7/2019 This has got to be one of the best NCIS stories I have read so far. Every character was so accurate and the storyline was so entertaining. I can't wait to read the sequel and I hope Tony and Ziva get back together. They really need each other through these hardships |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/12/2017 What a pair of callous shits your TIVA are. |
| prince-bishop chapter 3 . 8/19/2016 McGee is a trained agent why could he not protect himself? |
| prince-bishop chapter 1 . 8/19/2016 McGee is useless has a field agent he should stay back at headquarters and play with his computers. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/20/2015 And this is exactly why Tiva fanfiction is a bad idea - the writers are so bloody bad. They both turn into self-obsessed callous bastards, neither of them - the way you give really a damn about Tim, just about screwing each other. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/29/2015 It wasn't a mistake, it was dereliction of duty, and she should have been up on charges. |
| JperW chapter 4 . 9/26/2012 A coma after a shot in the shoulder? Seems a bit farfetched. Also, one million Tim McGee's in the US? Really? one in 300 people in the US is a Tim McGee. Seems a bit much. |
| mrs.addiecullen chapter 9 . 6/18/2012 great story |
| Berry Smoothie chapter 2 . 8/12/2011 aw...good story |
| makemeagryffindor chapter 9 . 7/25/2010 Nooooo, he can't leave! |
| Gingerstorm101 chapter 1 . 4/10/2010 its really good, but poor mcgee, i wonder whats going to happen to ziva now |
| LunaZola chapter 9 . 4/9/2010 Oh man, that was evil of you! I can't believe... nothing got resolved and he decided to leave. My heart hurts! |
| LunaZola chapter 8 . 4/9/2010 Yay Timmy! OH and Jesus Christ! Hell in a handbasket I tell you. Absoultely bonkers |
| LunaZola chapter 7 . 4/9/2010 Oh man... what could she possible hope to learn from his file? Especially after breaking up with him? What could she possibly want to know. I really hope Tony doesn't take his own team. |
| LunaZola chapter 6 . 4/9/2010 My heart just broke. :( I can see wehre that decision comes from, but at the same time now they will not be willing to protect each other. If anything, it could cause more harm because they may stop trusting each other and that will bring the whole team down. *sigh* |
