Great story!

Very well thought-out story regarding the relationships of the guys, especially Kel and John. So glad you painted Roy in darker shades, I get tired of him always being the 'goody-goody'.
The story had such a good flow, effortlessly keeping the reader engrossed until the very end.
The only constructive criticism I have would be to suggest being more careful with 'you're and your', 'pass and past', and 'bare and bear'. Little things, but when I am enjoying a well-written story, having the flow interrupted by a grammatical error just minimizes my enjoyment.
In closing, thank you for this fascinating and entertaining story, and please, continue to write more!

Great story. Felt so terrible for Johnny and Riy, so much turmoil. Thank you.

Awesome story. Aside from a few grammatical errors, your story has a nice flow to it.

Great story. I couldn't stop reading it! Well done. Var

That was a great story. For Johnny to be in tears, wondering what he did wrong to make Roy mad at him and say terrible things to him, Roy must have put a world of hurt on him without laying a hand on him. SHAME ON ROY. Shame, shame everybody knows Roy's name. :(-

I really enjoy stories that take me through a whole range of emotions. This one did just that. Thanks for sharing.

oh, I can't believe I didn't leave a review last time.

I really like your story and the relationships between characters, esp. Kel, Hank and John. Well crafted. I hope you might write more at some point.

thanks for sharing your story.

Wow! What an amazing story. Normally I wouldn't get that into a story that had Roy and Johnny at odds with each other but you portrayed this so nicely. I loved the interaction between Kel and Johnny, the camping trip was perfect. I loved the way you depicted Cap as well. I was only sorry to see this wonderful story end. I would absolutely love to see a sequel someday, in which the rest of the crew discover Johnny's past and he and Roy get back to being the friends that they were. And to see Kel and Johnny's friendship progress, as well as everyone else finding out Jonny's true age. I always felt he looked too young in the show. Anyways if you ever decide to write a sequel I'll be the first one to read it. THis was a really great well written story. Good job!

God Bless,

SW

Very touching story. :)

Glad he healed,and glad to see Dr. Bracket be the one to befriend him. Also, glad Roy recognized he had problems.

This is a wonderful story. Thank you for sharing you gift.

I found this story delightful. I love how you wrote it and the different plot. I love to wonder how Johnny's life was and you did put some nice thoughts in there and reasons for his feeling the way he does. And also I thought it really different to pair Kelly and John as friends, leaving Roy on the side line that caused the flash back. Excellent job. Sue

Oh, I really like how you developed this dynamic between Kel and Johnny. We don't often get that. And I'm such a sucker for Hank! :)

This was a great story! I loved the character developement between Kel and Johnny. Keep writing!