This is a fantastic fic. No one is out of character, and the word choice is really nice. It flows wonderfully as well. I especially appreciate how you had the twins react at the end.

Awww that’s so cute I love it

Brilliant. I loved this. I was a little thrown by the spelling of Hunny's name, but other than that, I totally enjoyed this. So glad the boys were looking out for her and that you featured Hunny and Mori, who often get overlooked. I love them kicking butt to protect Haruhi and only wish that part had lasted longer so we could see those guys pay. Also loved that you structured it by the first time, second time, etc.

Very nicely done! I hope you'll write more Ouran fic soon.

This was great. Interesting how it revolved around Haruhi, Hani, and Mori.

This is great :) especially the ending "suspended for cheating" it is so them :)

omg. i love the fluffiness of this story! so cute! and it's so in character. it's great! thanks!

Haninozuka and Morinozuka are fantastic in this fan fiction. Unlike the others, Hani and Mori do know when and how to act. I loved how stern but caring the two were. Although, I also wish this fan fiction was just a little longer. It's wonderful, though.

Awww, this was so cute! I love it! Did I mention-Aaaaawwwwww!

Oh my gosh! That's the sweetest most amazing thing I've ever heard! *sobs dramatically like Tamaki* Please say you've done/will do something like this as a long story! ) XXXX

that was supeeer cute. :

i loved it. especially what the twins did. :

So awesome.

Aww, that was really cute. :) I love how, at the end, the twins get Yukio caught for cheating. Great job! :D

I love the matter-of-fact writing style you use for this story. It suits the characters perfectly. In the end, I came away from this story feeling not only warm and fuzzy, but satisfied, kind of like I'm in on a secret.

Thanks for writing. )

That was a really cool story

Die what;s-your-face-villian! I liked it! It was well written! XD