Ooh I can't waitt to read the end ! I reallyy like this xD

Chapter one was reallyy sad. . . I nearlyy cried ! xP

Update soon please !

Rai

Ah, two sides to every story. I enjoyed it very much and very happy that you updated!

Amazing as Always.

I admire your writing skills! You've really captured how Tohru would feel if Kyo was taken away. I enjoy reading this stories because it shows how much Tohru cares for Kyo. (Kyoru fan for the longest time! -)

Amazing.

Very well done. 7 months exactly, give or take a few hours. I look forward to the conclusion.

wow so sad... are you going to show us kyo soon? i sure wanna see how he is dealing with this... update soon!

Ouch... Geez, that was harsh... Ouch. I commend your writing genius though! Wonderfully descripted emotions... Seriously, I was aching right along with Tohru... Are you going to write more on this? Or is it the end? Geez, I sure do hope you write more!

oh my god i broke done and almost cries as i was reading this i toatlly loved it so much and that is why i read angst! Oh god its been so long since ive read anything to so with furuba (patiently awaiting fruits basket next volume)

Dark. You're off to a good start. It's amazing what an anguished, tortured, grief-stricken "No... No..." can do, at least in my mind's eye as I read this. Keep running with this story. Keep going.

I really liked it. It shows how people can be so attached to one person, and when that person is torn away unexpectedly, people shatter. The name is cool and Tohru didn't turn out to be a crybaby. Please update when you can and be safe.

~The Only Onigiri

WAH! Poor Torhu. I think you did Tohru really well, she usually cries a lot anyway. Kyo was also done realy well. He's always trying to protect her and calling her an idiot.

In Our Darkest Hour makes the story sound as if there's going to be hope. Then the story takes a turn and everything shatters to pieces. Although that does work really well, but I think it's used too much. Okay, yeah, I'm rambling too much. You're great with the details. You HAVE to write more!

more more more must read more

AW, this was SO sad! You can finish this but make it happier! (You really good with detail, you should keep writing!)

I think Skies of Gray sounds good. I was depressed when I finished reading it though :( I hope you continue this story _

i love it so much, pleasepleaseplease continue!