Beautifully written, it is a shame that it looks like this will never be completed.

Great story keep Updating PLEASE! A little late I know but It's a great story!

This seems an interesting story :)

hope it gets updated.

you could put some separators between drastic scenario changes or focus/point-of-view from different characters though.

Also, don't know but i'm smelling that some evil from the past wants to appear again. He had not enough with

his butt being kicked back to a spiritual form several centuries ago, and now wishes to appear again.

It's nice to tell how Ryu and Nina feel for each other in the story. Again, please continue.

and a note to Aloisio:

As curiously as 'M' rating may be, it doesn't allow for 'lemon' content. Only:

- Explicit obscene profanities.

- almost-explicit sexual tension/teasing.

- Detailed kissing scenes (granted, emotionally heavy, but still not the act on itself).

- Graphic and detailed eviscerations, limb-severings, slicing characters in halves, detailing stuff; mainly gore.

but sex... no, that's for Ma rating, 18/21, and it isn't considered on this site by what it seems.

Hello! Please, keep writing. Your story kicks asses! Why dont you put some more "Mature" content (a.k.a sex), since your fanfic is M rated? Everyone likes to see the pairing Rei x Momo (mainly, because its sexiest) and the "advanced lemon" Ryu x Nina. Come on, were mature or not? More people will read it, believe me. But its good still.

hmm interesting cliffhanger there at the end. keep updating plz

Leave it to the ultimate evil to think of death as a mercy.

YES PLEASE DO WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!