Reviews for Once More, With Feeling
Loki The Trickster Zoroark chapter 6 . 4/6/2009
I never would of suspected Jigglypuff. Why is it always the ones nobody cares about?

Really good, though I suspected Red. Well, until next time.

P.S.: I swear to god, if you ever put any homosexual relationships in, I will stop reading the minute I see a hint of it.
Sentimental Semantics chapter 6 . 2/14/2009
Heh...I really liked the Arbiter. I sort of hoped to see him fight somebody, but I think his role as the investigator made more sense than if he had just fought people.

I kind of suspected Jigglypuff after having read the author's note at the end of 'Of Men and Mewtwo'. Still, I didn't quite see the hostage situation coming.

This entire fiction bears a tiny bit of similarity to the machinima called 'Hard Justice', specifically in its mix of crime and comedy. I laughed quite a bit reading this, and the plot was intriguing. That's a nice merge-too often do comedy stories lack plots.

Great job!
Drakaine chapter 6 . 2/13/2009
It WAS fun while it lasted.

“Wolf, are you still there?”

“No, I went to go get a pizza. Are you fuckin stupid?”

xDD That made me laugh.

This is probably my favourite chapter. Nice job, I enjoyed this. Not just the chapter, but the entire story. :3 Can't wait to see what your next SSB fic is gonna be!

~Silvs
Pae chapter 6 . 2/12/2009
Yay! She was found out! Heh, I guess I kinda see where Jiggy's coming from. I mostly use her as a punching bag. BUT SHE CROSSED THE LINE WHEN IT COMES TO MESSING WITH MEWTWO! RAWR! I like the ending, but I want to see some more Samus x Wolf later _ And Arbiter and Nana :D

I really can't wait for when you start another SSB fic. You're so good at describing fight scenes and giving characters personalities. I'll be watching!

~Pae

Over and out!

(I've always wanted to say this, lol!)
Ri2 chapter 6 . 2/12/2009
No more Arbiter? Aw, I liked him.

Jigglypuff is crazy.
Drakaine chapter 5 . 2/12/2009
I'M SORRY FOR NOT REPLYING SOONER!

Anyway, great chapters. xD I like the relationship between Wolf and Samus, and the one between The Arbiter and Nana. And poor Pichu. D: I'm still anxious to find out who's doing it all... xD

Update soon~

~ Silvs
Pae chapter 5 . 2/9/2009
*squeal* Thank you so much! I know I keep telling you this, but I really really mean it! ~_~ *smile* anyways, back to your story. WOLF WAS NAKEY! Oh, wait, does Wolf wear boxers? Cuz I couldn't stop laughing when Arbiter came in and he had to put his pants on! Haha! Wolf and Samus GETTING IT ON! Bow chika wow wow! Rofl. And Jigglypuff. I always used to see her as an airhead sort of gal, pardon the pun. But here, she's got some attitude! Like, higherups prissy chick! I will never look at her the same...

"Sabotaging a Simulator for Dummies," Lol. And finally, Nana. Her and Arbiter just make me want to go 'aw' for, like, an hour. She's just so simple, yet complex. She completely balances Arbiter, from the size differences to just about everything!

Okay, last last last, the door knobs. That was so original! I don't don't know, but something about it makes me want to install four door knobs on my door.

PICHU! YOU IS ALIVE! Now I am satisfied.
Pae chapter 4 . 2/6/2009
I was CRACKING UP when Wolf kissed Link. Holy crap! My sis was reading this, and she asked, "Does this mean Wolf is gay? Or bi?" I'm not sure how to answer. I'm pretty sure he's staight, but was just messing around with Link. It kinda makes sense, since dogs (or any animal within the canine family) will lick each other no matter the gender. And Wolf and Samus are so cute! I'm still worried about lil' Pichu. DON'T DIE!
Pae chapter 3 . 2/3/2009
Oh no! What's happening to Pichu!

You know, every chapter I read, I find some quote that I laugh my head off at after reading. Here's this chapter's: “No, junk food goes straight to my thighs.” Mewtwo has such huge hips, and those kangaroo legs make him (it? I just see him as a guy) look even bigger. If it wasn't for his manly chest (lol, you know what I mean), I would suspect him to be a girl. Oh, and the arm wrestling/burning. You know that feeling you get when someone scratches a chalkboard with their nails? That's what I was feeling. I was like, "No! No!" ...yeah, good times...
Pae chapter 2 . 2/3/2009
YAY! It's working! The review button is WORKING! Lol, anyways, favorite line: “That’s sad. Do you want a hug?” That just cracks me up. And I love the relationship going on between Wolf and Samus right now. I think they're among the best couples in SSB.
Drakaine chapter 3 . 2/3/2009
IhopeJigglypuffisnext. -shot-

To answer your question, I did like Halloween Havoc, but I like this more because the chapters are longer and we get to find out who's targeting the Pokemon. :]

Good chapter, hope you update soon~

~ Silvs
Drakaine chapter 2 . 2/2/2009
Nice chapter. I love the way you write Wolf, you make him sound so awesome. Which he is. xD

I'm glad that the chapters are starting to get longer, because that makes it more interesting.

Keep writing~

~ Silvs
Drakaine chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
"‘Get your scaly ass over here now.’"

Haha, that part was awesome. xD

I'm liking this so far. Sorry I didn't review earlier, I've been a little busy.

Can't wait for the next chapter! Wonder who's attacking the Smashers? 0:

~ Silvs
Pae chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
I just love how Nana is all over poor Arbiter. Hehe, and I think he makes a great addition to the SSBB crew, whether it be permanent or not. People's reactions to him I just can't wait to see: Luigi (yikes!), Mewtwo (...), and Donkey Kong (ooh ooh! aah aah!). I am so looking forward to the next chapter!
2010Mantis chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
An excellent start to the third chapter in this series. You seem to be increasing the lengths of your chapters, which is a good thing of course.

I really can't think of anything bad about this it's simply solid, although adding the Arbiter may turn a few people off.