I think you really should remind readers that this is some kind of ichigo hatery thing at first chapter. All I can see is ichigo yelling and crying nothing to do with anything. Really don't know what you want to express. Sorry for what I have said cause I was really hurt without warning.

even though this story is incomplete it is still quite good read.

I HATE THIS STORY YOU SPOILT IT YOU MUST LOVE AZIAN I WOULD LOVE TO BURN HIS EYES OUT IN REAL LIFE

FUCK FUCK FUCK AZIAN AND GIN AND BLIND EYES BASTARD FUCK THEM ALL

Okay, nevermind my previous question, just read this chapter.

Wait, so is Ichigo completely destroyed/erased?

Nice writing, by the way, you could put in more 'associations', I suppose (as in, write out events/mention events and emotions that current actions remind the character of), but good.

Ichigo constantly making references to shit he shouldn't know is incredibly grating.

Awesome chapter

hey, thats pretty good

Plot bunnies are adorable also i like the idea for the story so keep up the good work ~

I totally agree with Scaehime. Everything she said, I second. Out of curiosity, what happened that kept you from updating this specific story for so long?

Oh how i love this story! I really wish Canon Tatsuki had bothered to corner anyone to find out what was going on and than learn to fight!

Still waiting for a new chapter, almost four years later.
This fic combines a lot of things I like to see in Bleach fics: time travel, explorations of Ichigo's relationships with the other occupants of his inner world, a lack of focus on romance, Grimmkitty, and other friends of Ichigo's gaining abilities.
If part of what's been holding back the next chapter for you is how and whether to incorporate the later Bleach reveals about Zangetsu, pick something and run with it. Your readers will be excited to see a new chapter whether what you decide forces the fic further into AU territory or not. Personally, I'd like to see more of where you were already planning to go with this, but if you decide to take the later reveals into account, I'm sure it will still be just as enjoyable, or perhaps even more so.

I find it ironic that Ichigo and Candy Ca-Shichi had argued about throwing Nel like Ichigo threw Rukia, and then Grimmkitty goes and does it when they actually meet!

God bless,
Scae

That's what people want when they come to read a time travel fic of Bleach. The exact same things that happened in canon. So fun watching Ichigo having trouble with his hollow again for the 6537th time.

Hello! This fic is great! I hope you'll continue it one day!