I ain't gone lie I cried like a little bitch with this chapter, I don't think I've ever cried when reading. Ever. Thank you for the amazing work, its something else.

Missy’s internal dialogue is pretty dang funny.

I have my reservations about Eden’s showing up when she did. Especially, if the boys are acting like they are.

I’m super glad you continued this story. It’s fun. I can’t wait to see who she ends up with.

I knew the mystery girl had to be Missy. That was so sweet of Edgar

I haven’t signed into my actual account (puddinfreakystyle) but GIRL. This was amazing. I don’t know if you’ll read this this late in the game, but hot damn. You write beautifully, you’re witty, and your intelligence screams out from the pages. This is exactly the story I’d have loved to have written if I still wrote on here. It’s criminal that your story doesn’t have the reviews it deserves. I also want to thank you for the time I know you’ve put into this- I also write these super-long style fics and I don’t think most people understand how much time and energy actually goes into them. I’m not sure what else to say but well done, and I hope you’re using your writing talents elsewhere as well as for FF, because your style is a gift to the world. Once I log in I’m following you and reading everything you’ve ever written. Keep writing, and lots of love x

Reviewed.

Aww forgot about Marko kissing her 3 great chapter

Holy guacamole.

Best. Fuckin. Story. Ever.

You are seriously talented my friend. Your particular style of storytelling is rich and dynamic and your creativity is boundless. I was drawn in during chapter one and hooked before any canon characters even made their debut. That's talent.

I loved your main character. Missy was no Mary Sue and was super relatable even after being bitten. Your bad guy was mysterious and just the right amount of damaged and flawed to mirror the "hero" counterparts in the tale, though you did a fantastic job of not making anyone flawless or superhuman. Hard to manage when writing about the supernatural.

I had the supreme pleasure of reading the entire story over a few days time. It'll be tough not binging on the sequel only because I know I have zero self control when it comes to great writing and no way will I be able to resist your updates longer than it takes for the next chapter to emerge.

Thank you for sharing your gift of storytelling with the world for free. Though now that I've found you, loyal stalker- uh I meant loyal READER- that I am, I shall follow your writing wherever it may go, hopefully some day into the published world!

In the meantime I shall sit here quietly worshipping TBP and pondering what possible shenanigans are in store for Missy in the next installment... after all I'm sure Paul and Marko would NEVER get her into anything sordid, saints that they are ;p

And if your adoring fans may make any requests for the sequel, I have but two humble requests...

1. Star and David's backstory, I'm such a hopeless romantic and those two just kill me with heartburn
And...
2. That Dwayne spend the remainder of eternity never finding a suitable shirt to wear. Though you seem to already be pretty on par with that one praise Allah.

Until next time, toodles!

LOVED THIS STORY!

When you only find this story a month ago, so you don't have to wait 8 years to get to the end _ BUT IF I HAD FOUND IT 8 YEARS AGO, THE WAIT WOULD'VE BEEN WORTH IT! Oh my God, this story was EVERYTHING. I literally binge read it in like 16 hours. Unfortunately, I found it at 11:30 the night before I had to open my store but that's what they make concealer for.

Every scene with Missy was gold. Her humor, her wit, her every emotion was so tangible and beautiful to read. I could almost feel everything that she felt; you were so damn fantastic in writing her as an actual person that I wouldn't be surprised if I passed her on the street. I especially loved all of the moments with her mom; there was such a tenderness mixed in with a hesitant-ness about their past on Missy's side, but to see her finally to get to meet the woman her mother used to be before she was sick (especially in the last chapter, girl I was a crying mess) was amazing.

Your portrayal of the boys were all so accurate and fresh without being OOC; AMAZING! Dwayne's slight disconnect from Missy but his immediate reaction to save her after she was tortured by Patrick, and David's always steely demeanor that changed the second that Renee slapped Missy made my heart swoon. Max cracked me up; truly the patriarch in his Blood Sucking Brady Bunch. And the Frog Brothers; oh honey, those brothers will be the death of me. It broke my heart when they figured out what Missy was.

I could wax on poetically for hours but I don't wanna give you too big of a head. All in all, a fantastic story from a truly talented author. I enjoyed every second of reading this masterpiece, and I will be avidly waiting to read the sequel. Cheers love, xoxox

Ohh love This work wonderfully done

AHHHHHHHHHHHhhhhhhhhhhh. What. It's 1:23 A.M. and I'm crying and I shouldn't be because I have to get up early for work tomorrow, but here I am anyway. A few days ago I randomly decided to check this website to see what had been posted, and when I saw this story with your name appear I thought I must have been dreaming. I remember reading all 21 chapters of your story some time after you had disappeared (about three years ago), and being so sucked in by the story. And then... it was just over. And you were gone, and I couldn't do anything but re-read the story and wonder how you might have ended it. And then here you are, posting new chapters, so I HAD to read the old chapters again just to get all of the details and then I had to read the new ones which I was a little worried would disappear before my eyes because I gave up hope that I would know how you were planning to finish your wonderful story. Just... wow. I hope you were off writing other stories in your absence, because you have quite the talent for it. I'm really at a loss for words. I'm sure there are many others like me who feel beyond grateful to have been able to read the conclusion of this story. I feel like this is one long, rambly run-on paragraph of a review, but it's 1:30 A.M. now so I feel as though my coherent review-writing skills are justifiably lacking. I really hope there is a sequel some time soon, although these ending chapters were enough to hold me over just in case.

Can't wait ti read the sequel. I hope you start posting soon. I'd love to see Missy and David be together eventually.

I loved the epilogue! The meeting with Max (the cookies!) and of course the meeting with Renee (David coming out of nowhere and checking on Missy after her stepmother hits her again), and the conversations she's starting to have with David. I love Dad Paul for taking such good care of Missy, and I hope that in the sequel (SEQUEL! LOVE IT!) she'll have more bonding with Dwayne and Marko.
The closure she had with her mother and father was completely necessary, and very emotional. I think her burying her locket sort of signifies her readiness to start building up that family unit with the other boys - Missy had to say goodbye to her old family to start a new one.
I hope to see a lot of interaction between Missy and the characters you've established in this story - the Boys, the Frog Brothers, even Patrick and Max...
I am so happy I stumbled upon this story, and I am so happy I get to look forward to how other chapters in Missy's story unfolds

Lots of love,

RedRoses130

Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, I can't wait for the Sequel.