The premise of this is so silly. He should’ve had his answer with Eleazar. No one truly asks for proof when it comes to abstract things like God and souls. Even humans truly do not know if we really have souls. This is just so ridiculous and terribly frustrating to read

I keep crying! Is there something wrong with me?

i must say...you write really well!

i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & i love Bella & Edward together

Great story

Edward put "fresh" milk on Bella's tray! Lol, as opposed to not fresh milk?

Bella said he put fresh milk on the tray...lol,an Apple,pizza,salad and WHO KNOwS what else...was she not looking at the tray? She doesn't know what the other items are? She's retarded? Sorry, its just the things you say are sooooooo fucking dumb.
Was this story written by a child? If so your doing great and please disregard all my shit talking...but if your not a child... Maybe you should have someone look over this story so they can fix all your fuck ups!

How is it saving her life if they were gonna rape her? I'm just saying saving someone from being raped isn't saving thier life, its saving them from being attacked. And what was the the boss will be happy business? That was so cliche! Like these guys are paid to what? Find ugly girls with no self esteem to take advantage of?

Wow how convienant for for story that Bella chose that exact moment to wake up! Dumbass
And why did Bella tell Edward that he saved her life? I'm pretty sure the stupid twit was passed the fuck when those guys came up to her...sooooooooooo how did Edward save her life? She fainted while running...not exactly a life or death situation. And why look at him in "awe" even if he really did? Not gonna stop you from dying from cancer! Saving something that's about to die isn't exactly something special.

Wow you made Bella one of those stupid twits in scary movies that trip when guys are chasing her...I really hate your Bella...

Do you think that's adds something dramatic?
Before he could see my tears
Before he could see the hurt in my eyes
Before he could...blah blah blah

Its really annoying! And again, your grammar is shit!
Rose RODE her car to school did she? LOL
I'm pretty sure she drove the damn car not rode it!

I really don't see how Edward could like this Bella. She's fucking embarrassing ME and I'm just reading this shit. She looks at him...almost trips...rushes away cause she's embarrassed that he doesn't want to be her friend...aww boo fucking hop...and falls flat on her face...she's sees him and jumps in her car trying to get away cause she has some seriously low self esteem and hits his fucking car?! Does she not have a fucking brain? What a fuckin loser!

Your ruining Edward for me. Edward would never say " HOW does she look like"! Did that even sound right to you when you wrote it? Your making Edward come off as a fucking moron!
How does she look? What does she look like?
Those would be exceptable, especially the latter

I'm sorry did Edward just say that ROSE was the most beautiful girl in the world? What are you fucking stupid?

Yaaaaaaa the guy with rusty colored hair is a GREEK god...? Don't Greeks typically have dark hair?

Bella's dying...but still hasn't grasped what's important in life? I just can't be seen being driven around in a cop car!like omg