| Reviews for A Simple Promise |
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   SkyWolf12 chapter 19 . 5/6 Ooooooooh no. Why do you leave me hanging here? You're so mean TOT hope you update soon! Stay safe from COVID-19! ~SW12 |
| Mettatonsex chapter 1 . 7/24/2019 I remember reading this a few years back and I’ve just finished. Firstly, great concept. I always felt that Luigi would sort of come across as THAT sort of person, and Mario being the protective brother with a lot of history makes it really cute! Also, I thought maybe Luigi was questioning his sexuality maybe but I think you’ve made it clear he likes girls lol. I assume it’ll take quite a while until the story actually ends but hey, I’m excited for the outcome. It would be cool if you ended it where it’s a huge time skip and they’re in the mushroom kingdom looking back at your life, but that’s by the by and I honestly can’t wait to see your next chapter. |
| Brendan Wolff chapter 19 . 4/3/2019 Oh, man. I love this story. Keep up the good work! |
| 7King Bowser7 chapter 19 . 3/22/2019 Is this set in the same universe as the games? Like, after the bros graduate, is Pauline going to get captured by Donkey Kong and after she's saved, the bros get transported to the Mushroom Kingdom? |
| Captain Luky Greace chapter 1 . 3/22/2019 How they can be four years old apart when they are canonically Twins ? |
| animegamefanatic chapter 19 . 3/21/2019 Kirk looks jealous . . . though Jeff, he may have dark plans. he's obsessed with Luigi. . . . |
| Heart Ligdarre chapter 18 . 1/16/2019 You're alive! I'm so glad to see you are still determined to rewrite the whole story. |
| NormanWhitesmith chapter 18 . 11/23/2018 Amazing! I can't wait to see how Luigi handles things on his own! |
| HaruKin chapter 1 . 11/18/2018 This fic.. hnfnfjr I love it so much |
| animegamefanatic chapter 17 . 11/3/2018 Jeff...is he...planning on stalking Luigi? I really hope Kirk and his buddies get instant karma in the end...I hate bullies. |
| Assbutt McGee chapter 17 . 10/18/2018 Ahh, man... so good to see a post from you. I missed these boys. |
| NormanWhitesmith chapter 17 . 10/18/2018 I hope I can see even more of this very soon! I've been waiting awhile for a story update! |
| Infinite's Ruby chapter 17 . 10/18/2018 I just discovered this story and I'm already in love with it and this chapter is an emotional roller coaster along with how well written and emotional Mario's and Luigi's bond is. You did an amazing job with this chapter and I'll keep an eye out for your next chapter. Keep up the good work. |
| Guest chapter 16 . 2/15/2018 Why aren’t you continuing this |
| SEND HELP chapter 16 . 11/12/2017 FAM FAM I am copy pasting this shit and writing down it's name, that's how much I loved this fanfic. It was never boring and you came up with something different EVE-RY-TIME! Why aren't you my friend? I need your creativity fam Loved this to pieces and I need more! M O R E! Thx fam ;) |
