Hey! It's really good, I've just recently gotten into T:TSCC, I always wanted to watch it, but was putting it off and as I finally finish second season I find out that they don't have a season 3! bummer! I really like this :D

loving this story so far, hope you update soon! love this pairing!

Wow. Tension for two. I loved it. How Sarah & Derek skate around what they both need from each other. Deny it to themselves, but ultimatly feel the inevitable pull.

More Please!

Excellent piece. They're all way too short for my liking, but I take what I can get of stuff as good as this. Your writing style is great and your characterizations are spot on. I'll be anxiously awaiting more.

Some more awesomeness from you as always. You capture these characters specifically amazingly. Your Derek was spot on and very real. Don't second guess yourself, its natural to you, I can tell by your writing. And I fully expect more awesomeness in the near future. Keep it up.

Sarah

I'd really like for you to write more with Sarah & Derek. I always felt theirs would be, although very slow in coming, natural. They have so much to bind them together. The coming of Judgement Day, fighting to stop it, their love of Kyle and of course their love for John. Besides, young Sarah has outgrown Kyle. Were she to have met him now in her present state of mind she probably would have squashed him like a bug. (don't get me wrong, I to love Kyle - but she need someone like Derek now)

Did I tell you in the emails how awesome this is? Because it is, it is quite awesomely awesome.

No worries, the interaction, the way of thinking, it was perfect. It all sounded very Derek, and I really loved that Sarah gave Derek her favorite gun.

And the ending, I could almost hear the beats from the theme starting up.

Another wonderfully-written piece.