wow best story

i appreciate that some one has finally asked to include an oc but i guess i was too late still marvellous story but 4 constructive critism it lacks a tingle of emotion like when am y saw all the heroes dead her emotion or hurt should had been emphasised as she gets emotionally hurt very easily ok the rest is nice toodles

And so it ends. The heroes can rest easy... for now. Nega's still out there and Ix... he's up to something. Can't wait for the next story

Awesome story but y did shadow die and sonic too they can fight u know. I still liked ill read the sequel

Ew, Tomo's happy. That's fawking weird.

Tomo: *repeatedly stabs me* YOU MUST DIE!

*doesn't feel anything and continues typing* Hm, it appears that I am bleeding. Great finale and good luck with your life. *finally faints from blood loss*

All's well that ends well right? 3 cheers for all the heroes, especially Amy, who defeated Nega. But of course, he's gone, but not for long.

Well done, Greg. And I can't wait for Wor of Vengeance!

Well, all's well that ends well, I guess.

that was a great story with an excellent ending, and also I can't wait to see what other stories you have got planned for the future.

After a long wait, the story is finally finished. I'm proud of you, Greg. And I'm really glad on how the way this story turned out. Everyone is alive again, and everything is back to normal.

I'm looking forward to War of Vengeance. And I'll be happy to be working with the Star Sonic series again.

velocity: TACKLE GLOMP!

basil: o\o

qwerty: X3 very fluffy ending; i like it :D

This final chapter was on par and very cool, but I found one mistake in your ending. If Jet could wish everyone back to life, then why didn't he do it from the start? But other than that flaw, nice job.

This story was pretty good overall, for a first attempt at tragedy. There was good action, and the robots had a lot of variety, which is something I wanted from the start. There were many points where the story became very generic and predictable (meet up with hero, fight Nega together, fight his robot, find a weakness, get an emerald), but overall it really got mixed up towards the end and became a great story. I can't wait for you to start War of Vengeance!

*sniff* That was a wonderful story, Greg. I hope you continue to write more great stories like this!

Darius:*Watches Damien celebrate* Damn why couldn't he die? Anyway, Slash said nice ending and beautiful reunions. Good job! DX

Now that that's one, I have one little matter to deal with. *Loads shotgun* Come out, Nega! You can't hide forever!

Nega: Hide me!

YEAH, AMY. YOU FINALLY DECIDED TO NOT SUCK.

Amy: WHAT'D YOU SAY? *pulls out hammer*

Yeek! Gotta jet, but nice job!