i wanted him to imprint on bella

Your a genius!

(laughs)
So, will Jacob imprint on Bella?
Or at least marry her?

(sighs blissfully)
My wonderful, caring, sunshiney (before phasing), sweet, beautiful Jacob...
Oh, how much I love you...

(giggles)
I think the best way to describe Jessica would be...slut?

Pleased continue

jesus what the hell old man

Alright, this story was extremely cute. It kills me that he didn't imprint on her, but then again you have to throw in obstacles or it won't be a story. You just have to write more in order to satisfy that conflict and also my nerves. :) Also, even though you wrote this so long ago, it was so well written. You're a great writer and I hope you keep it up. I did indeed love the story. I have not only liked Jacob because he's a good looking character, but I have preferred him over Edward again and again because of the character you portray him as, the funny, open, honest, and flirty Jacob who is a good guy no matter the situation. I know you love Edward so I'm not going to slam him. I just really wished that in the books, he had more humor. GREAT JOB! I'm going to have to read New Moon: Reversed Roles now. Thanks for being awesome! And congratulations on those past awards. That's insane and you must have been stoked.

Haven't read yet. Going to, and going to love it. :D

This is beautiful, and well written. I know i'm writing this late as this was written a while ago, but i just needed to let you know.

The story was awesome and I love the way you the twilight with atwist I can't wait for the new moon version. Awesome writing.

I am enjoying this story! I find it just as appalling that Bella would want to be a wolf as I did that she wanted to be a vamp in the original book. That girl, regardless of the author, is really good at finding men that she has to 'change' for. I haven't taken the time to review every chapter, but I do like the story!

I am LOVING the more open and playful Jacob! :)

I actually think you portrayed Jacob really well in this chapter! Before he was a little too much like Edward- but now he seems like himself.

You probally don't ever look at this fic anymore but I love it! So ignore stupid heads and keep your imaginative circle of fun rolling! That might of been the happiest thing I ever said so congrats on that. Oh and haters suck, catch the irony of that statment? I forgot! Love your portrayl of Jake!