That was good.

All the way down to the end, though, once I had noticed the pattern - I thought the final good-bye would be to Susan, and that it would not be a good-bye forever, for waiting, or the other ones.

Wow...just...wow! Excellent story! [Even though it made me cry...:(]

T./V.

Ooh. That was deeper than I thought, and it seems fitting, because I always thought that Edmund learned the most. This is arguable, I understand, but that's just how I read them.

Finally-you wrote a fic that didn't make me cry!

Russet

Nice exploratoion of Eds character. I can imagine how his experiences would make him afraid of the word :)

I loved this, and I entirely agree with your author's note. This was a moving, very realistic ficlet and you did a wonderful job with it!