| Reviews for Unlikely Bonds |
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  Joinsdoid15 chapter 5 . 4/12 Can You update this plz |
| The truth chapter 5 . 2/19/2013 Awwww... Fiona... So true that Sonic would forgive her anyway,we all know that... |
 AzureQueen chapter 1 . 5/22/2012 Nice story :) I really love it! |
| Trent-Friend chapter 5 . 1/8/2012 This is the best stroy ive read so far it has to continue |
| Richy1991 chapter 3 . 12/4/2011 very good chapter |
| Richy1991 chapter 2 . 12/4/2011 great chapter |
| Richy1991 chapter 1 . 12/4/2011 mm good story |
| pia leroy chapter 5 . 12/4/2009 yo you definitely should update this story it has alot of potential! |
| Pokelad chapter 5 . 7/21/2009 When will the next chapter be? |
| tehdude123 chapter 3 . 6/25/2009 Great chapter! I just got 2 things to say: 1. Sonic and Rouge seemed a little OOC, but other than that it was good. 2. Metal Sonic seems to talk too casual considering he IS a robot. On the line, "You know... it's kinda sad they broke up..." I think it should be, "Hmm, it's rather depressing knowing that Sonic and the Princess are no longer together.". I just seems that Metal Sonic talks too human-like since he is a robot. I think you should improve that, but overall, it's another splendid chapter to Unlikely Bonds. Keep on updating! |
| pantedgieQueen13 chapter 3 . 5/30/2009 aW! I love it! |
| Craver Blackhawk chapter 5 . 5/17/2009 This is a VERY interesting story, please if you will, write chapter 6. I would love to read the rest of this story. |
| Unknownlight chapter 3 . 2/1/2009 Here's something you should know: Flip open a novel, any novel. Notice how every time a new character speaks, a new paragraph is made? For example: "Yo Tails! Long time, no see!" Said said, being slightly sarcastic. After all, he saw Tails last only yesterday. "Hey Sonic. I just finished upgrading the Tornado. Now it can go super fast! Wanna see?" Tails said gleefully. "Sure" Sonic responded. Should be: "Yo Tails! Long time, no see!" Said said, being slightly sarcastic. After all, he saw Tails last only yesterday. "Hey Sonic. I just finished upgrading the Tornado. Now it can go super fast! Wanna see?" Tails said gleefully. "Sure" Sonic responded. Doing this makes a story ten times easier to read, trust me. But anyway, I'm liking your story so far. Sonouge, so underrated. |
| pantedgieQueen13 chapter 1 . 1/25/2009 The grammar and tenses are all messed up, but I get the general drift. It's addicting. MUST READ MORE! |
| Sacred Insanity chapter 3 . 1/22/2009 Wow! This is a great SonicXRouge story! Good job! |
