Excellent narration and story telling. I really liked the descriptions and the dialogue in particular. Your characterization is spot on, and you explore some interesting themes in each one. Well done! I'm going to check out the rest of your stuff!

Good old Smallville times... I gotta admit I still miss it. Tyler Hoechlin isn't bad as Clark in Supergirl but it is still weird.
This story concept is really intriguing and I am curious about your meteor freaks.

Nice story

This was perfect! I especially loved the ending :)

This was genius! I actually really like the ending even though I was rooting for Chloe/Bruce but maybe that's just because I'm a sucker for bittersweet things. :) You're an awesome writer though and I'm definitely going to check out more of your stories

That, is a good ending. :)

What an unexpected but grand ending, thanks! It had been a while and I reread through the fic. Thanks for concluding it and bringing the Bat to Smallville. :)

I honestly enjoyed most of your fic, and then I came to the ending. I'm not going to the lie, the ending twelfth chapter epilogue was an incredible disappointment in my eyes. I was thoroughly enjoying the world you were building and then you had to back off and try to fit into cannon of the movies and show. This place is called fanfiction for a reason and though I respect your own opinion, there is so much potential in this fic and honestly you could have ended it the last chapter and I would have been content. Instead this epilogue feels forced and rushed and utterly unnecessary. I suppose that's just my two cents in for this story, really the rest of your story was so damn good that I was really very sad to see this twelfth chapter. Good luck on your future endeavors.

That was a terrible ending it felt rushed and plain dumb. Your writing an au story there's no need to make it tie in will any movies or tv show. That just shows a lack of story telling ability

I really enjoyed reading your story!

I was a little disappointed at how rushed the end of the story was, but I understand the reasoning behind it. And in the end, your ending made me a lot more content with the ending of the dark knight rises.

Hello there,
I really, really enjoyed your story, and I thank you for sharing. I really loved it :) The only complain I can come up with is that the ending feels a little rushed, the way you tried - probably too hard - to weave in your story with both canons. It could have worked better had it been a little longer, I think. Still, I'm really not a fan of Smallville's last season and I completely hated TDKR (as opposite to the perfection of the second movie) so I can just ignore the last part the way I do it with the canon stuff and still enjoy eleven chapters of absolute awesomness. Really, well done. You're great at characterization and your writing is totally amazing, and I hope to read more of your stuff.
Cheers,
Cloudy.

Bravo! Well worth the long wait!

To be continued? (Please please please!)

This was amazing! So glad you completed this, and it does feel finished, you wrapped it up quite nicely! :) I loved this story! :)

Good way to tie it into the current movie. Though this guy may not have Bruce's level, he is a detective. And proved it in the movie.

Brilliant, really well written fic. Love how you depict all the characters and how you keep Batman's identity secret for a while and then spring it onto people in the most effective way. That is lot's of fun to read. Can't wait to read more.