And thus it ends. This was a beautiful story that absorbed my attention from beginning to end. I'm glad that I was able to read it. Thank you Blood Butterfly for all of the hard work that you put into it. May the Lord God bless you as you move on to whatever it is that awaits you in the future.

Shalom

This story, it had a few bumps in the beginning, and yeah I know that I'm barely over 1/6th of the way through, but so far it's one of, if not the best, stories that I've read in this particular fandom.v I just couldn't wait to get to the end before writing my review.

Looking forwards to reading the rest.

Shalom

I’ve been a follower since the beginning and only recently revisited to find out you’ve posted like...five new chapters since I’ve been gone! I’m so happy and the last few were so amazing. It’s an amazing ending as is but I wonder if you plan on adding anymore in the future? It seemed like there was heavy hinting to the crew revisiting Hanshin while they were in flow, and I remember you mentioning some post-series snippets of the group after the main story was done...I think I can speak for everyone when I say we’d all be so excited for that :) such a beautiful series, thank you so much for spending a whopping almost 10 years on this fic...definitely kept me happy and entertained through the years!

Hello! This is my fifth time re-reading this story and I just want to say that I love this story so much. Aisha is such a kind, strong, and lovable character because of her flaws and the way she deals with them. I love how human you make her and how she’s so relatable sometimes. Her relationship with Fai is so worth reading and interesting because of all the stuff that happened between them. It was very real and it was like most relationships where people can get hurt. I just love how she’s so close to Kurogane as well and how Syaoran is like a brother. This story with all the arcs from the manga and anime really make it hard to see Tsubasa without Aisha. You’re a really talented writer and I hope this isn’t the end for the story. Maybe at least an epilogues here we see more of Fai and Aisha together because I can’t get enough of them! Thank you for writing this story and it will forever be my favorite and a masterpiece of Tsubasa Chronicles.

I need to vent something that I found really frustrating, R!Syaoran’s third fight against C!Syaoran. First of all, the whole group should have known better by this point; especially R!Syaoran that he never stood a chance by himself. We know that when he faced C!Syaoran back in the Dream World, R!Syaoran was greatly overpowered by his clone’s magic. Did he really think round three would be any different? Especially without having ANY strategy whatsoever? Secondly, the rest of the group were acting like a bunch of f***ing morons by letting him fight one-on-one, despite knowing full well that C!Syaoran’s magic would have been too strong at that point!

What really pisses me off the most about it is Kurogane forcing his ideology on Aisha about "letting your friends settle their own battles", and Fai not objecting in Clow Country! It’s HIS magic that C!Syaoran is using! He even warned them about this earlier! They ALL KNEW about C!Syaoran’s magic getting stronger with every use! They didn’t forget either, so there is no excuse for just how stupid they were acting!

Kurogane should have been smart enough to know that R!Syaoran would only end up losing on his own, but no! Instead, "You go settle things with yourself, kid"! I... really... hate... THAT... LINE! And what makes it even worse is that Aisha let’s this forced ideology influence her into not helping R!Syaoran, in a fight that he obviously could not win by himself! She has magic too! She could have been the most helpful to R!Syaoran during then! I can understand why Kurogane chastised Aisha for interfering in the fight against Seishirou, because at least R!Syaoran had a much better chance than his clone did back in Outo. But here, the outcome was far too obvious!

There’s a difference between settling your own battles, and knowing when you need help. R!Syaoran clearly would have needed help during then. Yet he blindly agrees to Kurogane’s idiotic proposal, all the while having no strategy planned to make the outcome any different than last time! I know that the clone was supposed to win to advance the plot, but still! You could have made it so that even with Aisha’s help, they still get overpowered by the clone! It was already such a poorly written mistake in the manga, but it’s even worse here, because they actually had someone else with magic, who could have been very helpful during then!

What really aggravates me the most about this is Kurogane himself! He thinks that just because he was more justified in lecturing Aisha for interfering with Syaoran’s fight against Seshirou means that his ideology should even apply to an opponent that they would clearly know by now is FAR TOO POWERFUL to fight one on one! And after R!Syaoran loses yet again, Kurogane doesn’t get called out for being so nonsensically bullheaded!

There are so many other things from the original story that you could have changed or improved upon for the better. Did you really have to keep the original ending the way it was from the manga? Why couldn’t you let the Clones live on after Fei Wong’s defeat? Why did you have to get R!Syaoran sucked into that stupid void, and pay up that stupid price to escape? Are you ever going to let R!Sakura finally travel with the group and be together with Syaoran? Aisha’s arch nemesis is finally defeated so there shouldn’t be any other excuse to keep them apart. I’m sorry if I was being too harsh. But you have so much talent as a writer. Someone of your level could have taken some creative liberties to improve what was essentially a very flawed manga, and fix many of it’s glaring problems. If you read this, then thank you for hearing me out.

I just got to ch 60 and my God I had to stop and comment this thing is a monster, a beautiful, glorious, 600k word monster that has made me cry. I dont think I can ever look at tsubass again and not think of Aisha. I love her and this story so much. thank you for all the work and heart you put into this. I started this on a whim about a week and a half ago and it has consumed me I want them to have a happy ending so badly. I love how you have grown in your writing you were NEVER a bad writer ever but you have grown so much! the way you have handled the angst is freaken perfect. the extra stuff with infinity made that world have so much depth it didn't have before. all of Kurogane and his personality is outstanding LOVE. your pacing never seems to fast you have a perfect groove and just thank you this is amazing.

I really love what you did with this whole story. I remember being worried I wouldn't like it as much reading the first chapter, but your writing has improved so much since then and I'm so happy I read this until the end. I cried so much during the Tokyo arc, which already wrecks me but with Aisha I was pretty much screwed over. I just love what you've done with all the character development and scenes that must have happened but you don't see in the manga. Truly a great story that deserves more reviews. :)

Thank you for giving us one hell of a rollercoaster ride! Looking forward to future chapters!

This story is honestly so amazing. I adore the relationships you've built between Aisha and the rest of the characters, i'm especially fond of Aisha and Kurogane's bond during the latter half. I'm planning on re-reading it over the next few days. Thank you for writing this and looking forward to seeing what comes next! 3

I would just like to say thank you for the wonderful story that you have woven (even if it isn’t finished yet). I say this because throughout my college education (I just graduated yay!), I had this to read and it was always memorable and when remembering my years in college, it was there as well. I only discovered this around 2012 I think, but this is one of my favorite stories I have read. How you characterized and develop the characters is amazing. I’m not sure where the story is going after this because it’s been years since I last read Tsubasa, but I hope to see more adventures of everyone because this is very dear to my heart and I always look forward to read more from you.

Thank you so much for making this! Ive been a long time fan of TRC. but this cant be the end of the story right?

...now ive really adored ur OCxFai..tehee.. i need more of that(please...)

I followed this story for a long time, but never left a review. It was enjoyable from start to finish. Tsubasa is not really a lively fandom, so it was such a treat to look forward to chapters from such an incredible, well thought-out, beautifully written OC story. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us, and for the very hard work and for the long hours that you put into this fic!

A very intriguing story. I've read it all almost in one go lol. Thanks for distracting me from the stress of my exams!

I feel like it there should be more.
Loved reading it.

Well I certainly hope this revolution turns out successful. That king needs to answer for all the innocent magi that were executed. He just sends out that mad woman Erzebet to commit gennocide on people who didn't deserve what they got; even letting her kill as many as she wanted, just to avoid dealing with her. Negligent coward!

Wow these last two chapters had me on the edge of my seat! Im so surprised and with how you ended the fight shocked me too. Now I wonder where you go from here.