I love this story! The up and downs are so fun. Thank you!

Yup, the age old does he like me...

I've read over thousands of ff stories, and this one is probably my favorite of all time. It's the perfect blend of humor, romance, drama, and a slow burn. I love your characters and the plot. What drew me in most was how Edward and Bella's relationship grew. I would love any more outtakes, especially EPOV! I want to know what's going through his head! Please know you are so talented and I look forward to reading more of your works in the future. :)

Why is bella stated as being a lawyer when she is not in fact one.
She is basically an administrator (pa or a legal secretary) as mentioned in chapter two

So as I read your story the one thing jumps to my attention is your offhanded comments about transgenders
But I realize that this story was published in 2009 when the world was a different place- I hope you realize that that comment was not only offensive and ignorant but also false. The judge ruling against the mental sanity of an 8 year old is appalling and I can only hope that since then you've grown up enough to realize that.
Not asking you to consider changing and also continuing the story because rather than leaving because you're a good writer with an interesting story to tell.
Just wanted to bring to your attention that this might be misconstrued and probably leads to many people refusing to read this story which is generally entertaining.
So proceeding with the story until further homo/transphoboc comments appear.

Hello, I loved your story. It was very refreshing and different in a good way. Would have loved it if you had a sequel to it. Thank you again for making it so realistic.

First of all, thank you so much for writing and sharing this awesome story. I couldn‘t put it down even if I tried.
Chapter 27 was my favourite! I have laughed until I was in tears...really...so great! Edward growing more and more frustrated while their parents and friends arrived unannounced followed by hilarious discussions, had me laughing so hard.

I also loved the part she blurted ‚I love you‘ during their typical banter. I could totally imagine this scene.

What I would have liked to read, was the part with the handcuffs and the use of them...that would be hot. But sadly it wasn‘t written. Maybe in your outtakes...I will check that out!

She need to tell someone. Emmett?

That is mean

Loved the story ! Wish you would write a sequel

AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING.I loved this story and everything about storyline and how much detail you have to their jobs showed dedication.I fucking LOVED the Edward in this story,you somehow managed to portray him as a cocky bastard and a gentleman their love hate relationship was the best thing ever, the bickering was just pure story had the right dose of everything and I immensely enjoyed your writing.

Great and funny story.

I think Bella needs to tell Edward about James, but of course she won't.

These two are hysterical. Getting thrown into the drunk tank. But how does that bode for being attorneys?

Way to go Edward, he finds out Bella is being stalked, throws a tantrum and abandon her in a dark street knowing that James knows exactly where she is.