I really liked this story. I was going to review in earlier chapters but I just got so into the story and didn't want to pause reading.

Oooh please please please do a sequel! this is really good! PLEAAAAAAAASE!

Omg omg omg that was purely amazing I loved it I was crying a lot you are so good I look forward to reading stories you do in the future read every chapter wow I can't put into words how I felt dang well awsome job and keep it up :)

Thia was probably one of the best stories I've ever read. I really enjoyed reading this, and i couldn't help but picture if this was to be made into a movie or something. It really could be. Not really for Disney, but it would still make an excellent movie, you know?

I really, really enjoyed reading this. When I read a good story I'm in a such a good modd it takes a lot to bring me down from my buzz. You're story did that for me. I've been looking for a good story for a long time. I'm so glad i found this. It makes me see the truely gifted writers of FF.

As much praise as i would like to say, I would say to reread your work. I noticed a few, minor as they were, mistakes. Just read over your story, and youll find them. I do that from time to time on mine to make sure that they are in good order.

Hope to read more of your stories.

~Tori

That was a good chapter and an even more amazing story. I dont think with this ending it needs a sequel. But I'm glad they used magic to save her. (Never said anything about it to you. Nope). Haha. But I cant wait to read your next story.

That was a really good chapter! I cant wait for the ending. You have a true talent and I hope you keep writing after this story is done.

Oh my gosh. That was so good. I'm wondering fi they'll use magic to stop him, though I'm sure the story has enough action alread. Alex you got some 'splaining to do. Haha, I crack myself up. Or if Dean will protect her...Hm. I dont know and I hope you update soon :]

Thanks for the review on my story, I LOVE constructive criticism. I think that it is really cool that you changed the names of Alex and Justin, but still kept in mind there Latino heritage. But I will mark this down as a favorite story so I can finish reading it and give you more feedback!

Hello again :]. I really do like this story. I don't know what it was called before you changed the name, but I'm sure it was great. The only thing that I have a problem with is the grammar. Sometimes there are unneeded commas and just a little grammar mistakes. Nothing huge or distracting.

AWESOME chapter! Sorry I havent reviewed recently. My best friend moved and I have been helping her this passed week in a half! I love your writing style. I actually forget that Im reading a fan fiction story. Its great!

Wow. This is really good. I love how you left us with a cliff hanger wondering what she did. And Max, well Max likes anything that walks. But I always thought it would be cool if SOMEONE made Justin Gay because God knows Disney won't. But I love the grammar and this is a really good story.

That chapter was awesome! I cant believe its ending soon. Will there be a sequel?

I actually liked this chapter!

I really liked that chapter! I love Carmens character. Keep up the great writing, i cant wait to find out what happens next.

IS THIS A JALEX FANFIC

I HOPE IT IS !