| Reviews for First winter |
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Guest chapter 8 . 3/7/2017 I know you wrote this YEARS ago. But I still felt the need to leave a review of this chapter. I was really enjoying this story and your plot but this chapter absolutely ruined it for me. I can't even bring myself to finish the story at this point. It was so bad and ooc I physically cringed... Also inside jokes with friends should stay that. Inside jokes. Unless it pertains directly to the story like you shouldn't include them in your stories. It was not funny and The racism used very well could have offended other readers. I hope your writing has improved in the years since this story. |
Corrisha chapter 14 . 1/11/2015 Sooooooo cuuuuuuteeeee! I need this to continue! :D |
fluffypixl chapter 14 . 8/6/2014 I love this story! I started reading it yesterday and I have barerly been able to do anything else :D One of my favourite parts was when Mark and Vaughn stole the boat, the whole chapter was hillarious xD Keep up the good work and I look forward to the next chapter :D ( My english is not very good so if some parts of the text makes no sense I'm sorry. |
fangirl chapter 14 . 8/2/2014 Omigoshomigosh sososo cuttttteeeee |
Kitcat22 chapter 14 . 8/1/2014 Oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh!I LOVE this!Please continue to write this, its AWESOME!The story line is amaz. You are an awesome writer!So please continue this awesome story from an awesome writer! |
Guest chapter 14 . 8/1/2014 Love this!Cant wait for the next one. So please update soon! |
LaineL0viXo chapter 14 . 7/3/2014 Me again :D Gosh, you NEED to finish this, okay? You just made my day with day and...I love you for this story 3 Some amazing story this is! Have a good day :") |
LikeSynonymsForJoy chapter 13 . 7/4/2014 I am so, so, so happy for this story's continuation. I was following its progress years ago, and when the updates fizzled off, I can't say I wasn't disappointed to see a good story ebd prematurely. Your writing has changed and inproved in leaps and bounds, but it's always had a lovely charm to it from the first chapter. I wish you luck in this story's completion and I must say that it's stuck with me for years - I've always eondered what you had in store for Vaughn and Chelsea! Keep up the lovely writing. :) (this review is meant for chapter fourteen, but I received an error message telling me I already reviewed said chapter.) |
LolzMaster101 chapter 14 . 7/3/2014 OMG thx for updating, the chapter was really good and well written, update soon :) |
Guest chapter 13 . 5/22/2014 OMIGOSH! DIS IS AMAZIN'! PLEASE OH PLEASE FINISH DIS! |
CrazyFan chapter 13 . 5/6/2014 I beg you. Write more! I love this so, so much. I'd die if this were not to be continued :"( Not literally, but a part of me would die. Have a good day :") |
Ashiasama11 chapter 13 . 3/26/2014 i read this amazing story when u first wrote it but then i thot u stopped and was so sad but today i remembered u so i said i should check maybe she did update and was so happy i found u did! you are very talented in writing u make me live and imagine the story .. i cried at her past and laughed at when vaughn teased her a lil bit XD U MUST CONTINUE AND WRITE OTHER STORIED ABOUT HARVEST MOON CHARA ..IM UR NUMBER ONE FAN xD |
LolzMaster101 chapter 13 . 2/26/2014 One of the best fanfics I have read! Really love the way the story is going and can't wait for the next update :) |
0DeletedAccount0 chapter 13 . 2/12/2014 .GOD. This is so awesome! Best day of my life :") I haven't even read the the chapter because I wanna review first. But I'm very sure it'll be great. Oh well, this has just made my day and now I remember that I'd come across this fic exactly a year ago. Anyways, thank you so much! :") |
Kimmith chapter 14 . 11/4/2013 I really really love this story, but honestly there's a hella of a lot of flashbacks. |