Reviews for Stumbling
Little Follower chapter 1 . 7/22/2018
Before I say anything else, I'd like to take a moment to appreciate your wonderfully comedic story summaries and disclaimers. You manage to find fun in even the simplest of things, it would seem!

A fun read. The modest Ami falling victim to her more fashion-savvy friends, eventually becoming stuck in those murderous foot-torture devices, how Ami and Zoicite...or, Zach, I guess, play so well off each other. And, of course, the awkwardness. And so, the goofy little romantic trilogy comes to a close. I'm not sure if you'll ever end up reading these reviews I left, given that almost a decade has passed since you posted it, but if you do ever see them, I urge you to continue to pursue writing; to not get hung up on your weaknesses, but to instead play to your strengths as you did with this little masterpiece.

Best of wishes, and best of luck.
LadyMakoto5 chapter 1 . 7/21/2017
I loved this trilogy. These are now my favorite Ami/Zoicite fanfictions. Now I wish I had peppermint hot chocolate.
Nadesiko-hime chapter 1 . 3/11/2017
Admito, que he sido una de las mujeres que se han enamorado de Mr Darcy (suspiros)... momento inconmodos pero finalmente lindos; ame cuando la beso...y la reaccion de Mina genial... lindo cierre

I admit, I have been one of the women who have fallen in love with Mr Darcy (sighs) ... moment uncomfortable but finally cute; Love when I kiss her ... and the reaction of Mina genial ... cute close
KageNoNeko chapter 1 . 11/10/2014
This was an awesome little tale.
LoveGlutton chapter 1 . 9/27/2013
Aaaaaaaaaaaw
LilyofAzra chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
I love this story. It is absolutely adorable and rather realistic, because first dates tend to be a bit awkward.

I would be overjoyed if you contiuned in this universe with the other senshi and their matching generals.
Kasumi Uchiha chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
I love this series! I think they are may favorite Ami/Zoicite fanfictions so far 3
Veritas Found chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
Can I just say how much I've thoroughly enjoyed this little trilogy? You've caught that awkward vibe of geeks dating perfectly, and the whole time I'm just giggling like a loon 'cause I know them (heck, I am them), and this was just perfect and adorkable and really made me miss my geekboy. I love how you did Zoi, 'cause he was such a goof, and your characterization was fab. (Seriously. E-cookies for this. Awesome fic deserves major e-cookies. 3)
Chrysalin chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
I know this is something you wrote some time back, but I enjoy getting reviews for my old stuff, so I figured why not.

Frankly, I love this little series. It was largely due to these three stories that I really became interested in Zoisite and Ami as a couple- they're so damn cute! More, given Ami's social awkwardness, it was utterly believable. There aren't a whole lot of stories that can make me literally laugh out loud, and yours made me do so more than once.

Also, I now want peppermint hot chocolate despite it being mid-July. See what you've done?

~kittikat8531
00j gd ett oo h fsjj g s d chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
This mini series was so so cute. I love Ami and Zach as a pairing and appreciated the awkwardness of their date - it could only happen to them. I also liked how Ami would consider how each of the other girls would act in a situation, it really showed that she considers absolutely everything. Great story!
kirkr0se chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
A few typos, but that was STUNNING. I loved it.

~Mademise Morte
rainbabie chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
Loved this! So CUTE, and absurdly amusing! I grinned the whole time!
Aquafall chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
I had so much fun reading this. Thanks!
Fox May fictionpress chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
OH MY GODDESS! I could not stop laughing, I read all three stories for Awkward and could not stop laughing, please write more. This is so so funny.

And you know how Zach found Ami, it kinda happened like that for my boyfriend and I, so art does follow life in a very humorous way.

Very funny, very well written, the perfect thing after a long day, please write more.

Fox May
Beloved Dawn chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
Loved this one too. And jsut so youknow, the twelve dancing princesses has been one of my favourite books since about the fourth grade. Can't wait till you get it put up!
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