Damn, this story was absolutely fantastic but that ending hAS ME SHOOK

Well, that's not nightmare fuel AT ALL.

Holy shit... I am seriously speechless about this story... ok wait first off, I am completely thrown off about that ending... no idea. I've just been starring at those last couple of paragraphs for about 20 minutes so far and I'm completely puzzled.
And I must say, your Donna impersonation is AMAZING! ugh im so jealous of you right now! I could imagine her so vividly when reading this and I must congratulate you!
Anyway great story! Definitely write more!

OMGOSH! So he was in the dream the entire time?! D: Doctor! How could you get beaten by a giant fly!?
XD This. Is. Amazing. Just wanted to say that. It messed with my mind a few times, and it was a really fun read. It's kind of like the movie "Inception" which has everything to do with dreams, and it messes with your mind about 10 times as much as this! For those who've watched it, you know what I mean! XD Anyway, great film, "Inception". And great story too!
-Misty

OH GOD THAT ENDING! That was amazing! With all the running and the dreams, and the Doctor and the fly thing interacting in dreams, it was great! Creepy and with a twist at the end. Wonderful. Simply, wonderful. This could be an actual episode.

Omygosh...this is what I was partially expecting, except I expected it to be Donna's dream, not the Doctor's. Makes sense though. It's his dream, he can see everything that happens to him, which would include Donna's activities. Such a bummer ending, but such a good one, too. Bravo! I look forward to reading more of your stories!

"When buzz-boy came back she was just going to look a tad suspicious." - I don't know why, but this was the best sentence in the chapter! Haha! Just made me laugh!... Sorry. Onward.

Whoa...nice image of the sandman. Not something I was expecting...PERFECT! Love the story! *continues reading*

Whenever someone is in danger or distress, Donna, for all her complaining, snaps into a more thoughtful mode. Your Donna seems too callous, she's as worried about people as the Doctor and can tell when it's high time to stop sassing about. There are two sides to Donna.

Wow really scary. Enjoy this story very much. Well done

Fuck
That
Shit

That ending though. THAT ENDING.

That was some intense shiznit. And that ending seriously blew my mind.

I still don't know what happened. I've been sitting here trying to figure it out, but I keep being like... 'no, you think this. No, you want this. Well, this is what's probably happening but this is what I'm going to believe. No, ah, I'm sure it's this!' And... I... I can't figure it out. ._.

Have you seen the movie Inception? It's like that ending. Where you just stare and go 'wat'. I still don't know if /that/ was a dream or real life. BI

So, ah... yeah. What was your intent for the ending? Was it supposed to be conclusively one way or the other? Or was the purpose for everyone to sort of decide on their own? Did you have a clear intent, or is it open for interpretation?

I'm still sitting here, completely mind blown.

That was... rather amazing. I'm slack-jawed, right now, actually, because it was so good. I kept saying to myself while reading "Oh my God, this would make an amazing episode." Too bad Ten and Donna are over with, now. That was blinkin' amazing. Great job! 8D

That was sad, but I'm glad it was not unrelentingly morose. Those just make me depressed. I liked this, though the ending threw me for a bit, but I have decided to ignore it. Poor Doctor. Keep writing!

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BUNNY

Wow, that was fun to read! And the ending was a surprising, and sad, twist! Good writing, keep it up!