Honestly, any ships involving Snape kind of make me gag. I guess my major qualm would be that Remus is not gay, and I can’t really see him and Sirius or Severus being an item. Sorry. It was especially revolting when Remus thought about Snape shirtless. I had weird dreams about it that the night after I read that chapter. Currently I’m doing a reread, since I haven’t read this since i was younger.

You really need to learn what a cliffhanger is. A twist or revelation at the end of a chapter is not a cliffhanger. A cliffhanger involves an unresolved dire situation. A surprise visitor is not a dire situation, unless it's the villain. Very few of the things you've labeled cliffhangers in this fic are acually cliffhangers.

So, Draco is allowed to throw temper tantrums and hurt Harry for weeks with no reprimands, but the ones time Harry loses patience with Draco's abuse, he is the bad guy?! Snape had some pretty strange standards for child rearing. Of course, he generally let's Draco get away with murder, so I guess it's par for the course.

So, Snape apologizes to Remus for speaking so cruelly to Harry, but not too Harry himself? I guess he's not really sorry, he is just trying to get in Remus' pants.

What a wonderful story! I feel really bad for Draco having lost Lucius...(that "Daddy" he screamed ripped my heart in two) and Charlie for losing Tonks! Seeing Sirius again tore me up, but I'm glad there was an opportunity for some closeure for Remus and Harry. I love the way you had Voldy snuff it; he deserved the pain!
I hope there's a sequel so we can about baby Ophelia Réve!

What did sev mean when he said he had a daughter on the way I must have missed that bit what di s sev mean when he said he had a daughter on the way I must have missed the answer to that

Hmmm, so even when he does (sort-of, but not really) apologizes, he can't even say the words, minimizes the abuse by saying he was only 'a little too harsh', and piles on the excuses for his bad behavior. He should take lessons from the 16 year old child sitting with him about accepting responsibility and actually apologizing when you are wrong.

Really?! A Mary-Sue?! I should have guessed since you are obviously a Snape fan-girl who thinks he can do no wrong and denies that he ever abuses children. Let me guess... you are envisioning a threesome with yourself (oh! sorry! 'Abigail'), Snape, and Remus.

Wow! Snape is such a coward. Even when he knows he behaved horribly and abused Harry yet again, he is too much of a a weakling to say it out loud. Are we still supposed to like this ass?

So... Snape apologizes to Remus for verbally abusing Harry, but doesn't actually apologize to Harry...? So, I guess the apology was just to try to get into Remus' pants, because otherwise he would have apologized to Harry as well. It also makes sense that he was not really sorry when he goes right back to verbally abusing Harry when something bad happens; wash, rinse, repeat... Has anyone evaluated him for dissociative identity disorder considering he can't act like even a half-way decent person for more that a few days at a time?

I totally enjoyed your story I'm one of the lucky ones that got to read it after it was completed the only thing I had a hard time understanding was Harry's scar hurting at the end of the story as that horcrux was taken from him when he killed himself. I truly hope that whatever illnesses you were having are in the past now and hope that you continue writing such fantastic stories.

Now i am glad i read the reviews and won‘t even start. I just dob‘t like slash

This was a wonderful story, Julz! Job well done!

I loved the Transmogrification nod to Calvin and Hobbs! I'm thoroughly enjoying your story!

Hi,
Just wanted to tell you I really like this story, and it is great in a lot of aspects. I just wish you had mentioned it being a Slash with Harry earlier. I've tried and tried again,but I just can't read it. Don't mind background slash, but i can't stand the main character.
Anyway, love the plot idea,
Aurora

The assassins really will be out to get you this time!