No matter how I hate Vernon in there but he is better be killed. I cant take it when he is suffer.

aww it will better if there slighy young love between harry and susan or someone else . i wish

Congratulations on the little ones and the satisfactory continuance of your growth in writing. Since you have given up on this story, why not do what many others have done and put it up for adoption?

I really need to check back on this site more often. I hope you return once and a while and you see this. I didn't want to update with a new chapter because people were disappointed when I stopped writing this. It wouldn't be fair to the people who still have me on alerts. You are more than welcome to take this over, and you'll probably do it better. I don't believe it was Sirius, even if it seems like it could be him. If it were Sirius, they'd have known since there were no reports of him leaving as well. If he broke out at the same time as the Dursley's, they would know. I think it was a higher up Ministry person who could do it and hush it all up. However, if you take it over, you're free to do whatever you want. If you can manage to make it seem like Sirius, you're welcome to. If you don't, I do look forward to seeing how you bring in Sirius.

I was just a few years older than you when I started this. So long ago... lol. I've seriously considered trying to write it again since Harry doesn't live in the abusive situation anymore, but it's still not easy. So I'd be happy if someone could take it over and finish it.

Hmmmm, I am 14 and I write books both from scratch and fanfictions. I might be willing to finish this one for you. I like this fiction and I think it should be finished. I was wondering if you had any plans before you got your new computer? I've had to finish stories for school, part of my grammar honors class. My name is confidential but in my group of friends, I am known as Jane Hopper. Maybe you can add another "chapter" with a note to me with some facts if you have any. I might just type the chapters in the comment box and you can copy and paste it into place. I think Sirius Black kidnapped Vernon and Petunia, he would have definitely wanted revenge for the wrongs done to Harry and he wouldn't be too cruel to Lily's sister. I don't know how old you were when you wrote this but you did a good job, I've often been told that I have a talent for writing and I'd love to finish this. Hope your family is well, let me know if you want me to finish it.
Jane Hermione Hopper :)

That's fine.

I hate you for doing this

NOOOOOOOO I WANT TO KNOW WHO DID IT

Update ASAP I love it!

Why did you mark these stories complettee? They wouldn't have showed up if you hadn't marked them complete and I wouldn't have wasted my time.

Hello. If this story hasn't been apodot I would love to take it under my wing, granted I was thinking of doing my own Harry Potter story, but it's been so long since I've read the books and this story has gotten me into the habit again. I do have an account, but my laptop has currently crushed and I'm too nervous, to write anything on my IPad since it has a habit of going a bit funny . (Even now I'm a bit scared typing this review out, because I don't know what it will look like when it gets to you.) However my account is smokescreen- ninja, if you want to PM me, it will take some time to get back to you though. I do understand why you have stop, but the Severus and Harry father and son relationship reminds me a lot like batman and robin (Dick Grasron) relationship and I would really love to finish it for you, I even have a couple of ideas in my head already.

Anway if not, it's cool and I wish you luck with your life.

U are kidding.

I love it most when Harry calls Sev' "Dad".

update more please...I really love this story so much

Well the story was great! I wish you would continue, but sinse you said you weren't can I ?