:) good story...

Great story! Loved it!

Sheppard got lucky, but I guess the drone-making facility got more whumped than anything...is it beyond repair?!

You know, this would be the perfect next episode. I would LOVE to see this one in action! Already re-read it about 20 times! It just proves you don't have to leave Atlantis to get a good story! Thank you very much for writing this!

Well, that was very intense, and really terrific, thank you!

Great story! *iz a proud whumper* Ya whumped Shep so well. Well written and well thought out and very intense. Good on ya. Cheers! }:O

Raven

Fantastic story. :)

Marvellous whump, thankyou. I'm now off to look at all your other stories...

Great story -loved the whump! Realistic, well thought out and brilliantly described - had me holding my breath along with Sheppard! Love how much better he felt when his team got there and the wonderful scene with Rodney being his usual oblivious self at first, but managing to get across how relieved he was his friend was OK.

This was wonderful. I love the suspense you created. Everything was perfectly timed and not over the top. Loved that you had a bit of team Luff in there too.

I really enjoyed that! Especially John interacting with the Marines.

Thanks for sharing )

Holy crap, that was intense. Fantastic story; really well-written.

I adored the interactions John had with his friends and even Atlantis. Your characterizations were very good as well. Thanks so much for sharing.

Eek! Nice job on the Shep whumping and the agony of waiting for rescue.

Well done!

I could just see that blade against his throat and man, that was intense! Good writing and such suspense. Thanks.