I loved this fic so much!
I -no joke- SQUEALED like a five year old MULTIPLE TIMES during my binge-read. The proposal was probably my fav, I loveloveLOVED the subtly and teasing you wrote in; it suits their dynamic so well! Truly, I really enjoyed reading this :)

Thank you lovely story.

I am enjoying your story. Thank you.

It certainly isnt too late to retract an invitation that is yet to be mailed!

I have no criticisms, I lovvvvvvvve this story! keep going!

Many thanks for the enjoyment I had from reading your excellent story.

"DRUG" is not the past tense of the verb to drag. It is used in speaking in parts of USA but is not acceptable in written work, use dragged instead.

I enjoyed your writing. Your use of grammar and spelling is exemplary and your story like is strong. All you have to do is include a slight more angst and it will be perfect. Keep writing

I love this story! It's an interesting reworking of the original.I do have a comment regarding the writing and editing. Dropping ther" from your seems to be a very common problem in almost all the P&P even you sister , Mama. It should beyour sister". I seriously see this happen in almost every single story!

Leave it to Collins to ruin the day for Elizabeth

A much more enjoyable experience at this Assembly along with notolerable "comments!

It's universal that Mr Collins is a very stupid man! Lol

I don't always make a comment on every chapter because it's so good that I don't want to stop reading it for a minute!

It's great so far!

„Georgiana, Jane, Elizabeth and Miss Ashley embroidered while talking to each other ... „

Why do the guests have ther handcraft at Pemberly? Surely they didn‘t take it from ther home for a Picknick-party

I like your story very much. Thanks for all the work you put in it.