I don’t care how the Twilight books really ended, this fan fiction is so good and amazing that this is the ending in my mind. You did an amazing job of writing a real feeling and believable story about Jacob and Bella. You perfectly captured Bella and Jacobs love, along with how Edward would’ve reacted to being rejected. This was an amazing read!

This was amazing. I always loved Bellas and Jacobs dynamic! He always brought out the best in her and got her to be more outgoing. I loved that you kept that in your story! Thank you so much!

This is one of the most well written stories I have ever read. You might be better than Stephanie Meyer herself.

Loved this so much. I was always Team Jacob and was so disgusted with how the series ended. I love that this story had just the right amount of angst and that she didnt just quickly get over everything. I mean come on first loves are hard to move past especially at that age where emotions run so high. It was a perfect journey.

Ok whats with the lyrics in the middle of the chapters?

Why is this story rated M?

Lost times of how many times I rolled my eyes in this chapter after the 20th I lost count. Cause quite frankly her bahavior before how she wanted him and missed him. Sorry but that just makes me wanna tell her God ur the perfect doormat and sucker. She easily could have just fallen into his arms. Quite frankly it wouldnt have surprised me if she did take off with him.

No offense and I dont mean any disrespect cause u've made it clear this is a JXB story but her having left Jake not once but twice. That paints a picture of a girl who is immature and quite frankly doesnt knw what she wants yet. Basically not capable of making a decision of her forever cause she believed a guy wouldnt leave her and he did twice. Which makes her look guilable and desperate. She also left someone who loves her with their whole heart twice. He had to watch twice as she pined away for someone who wasnt worth a single tear or heartache. Twice he had to build her up again. So for the pack or Leah in particular to be weary of her and not believe that she would leave again at the chance of being with Ted again isnt out of line. In fact it would seem patholigical and consistant with her MO. If the pack wasnt waery of her that would worry me.

Jakes right why should what they say matter?

Ok what time line is this cause I am so confused here. Ted left and she had gone to Volterra? So what exactly happened there? Has he already left her twice?

Ok this seems to be going no where.

Please tell me the story gets better. Cause this Bea makes me wanna slap her and maybe it'll give her some sense that God evidently never gave her or was take away with Fuckward.

Probably the best fanfiction I have ever read. You are an extremely good writer, and I wish you the BEST of luck. I like Jacob and Bella's dynamic more than Edward and Bella's. They are best friends that happen to be in love, and are living life together. You captured that SO 1

It's BEAUTIFUL. Exactly what I've been searching for.

Yes Bella. Why do you have to be so distressed that dead rotting corpse left you? AND the corpse was cold, abusive, deceitful and manipulative. Made you feel weak and small and ugly.. WHy oh why?M ost people would be relieved. Any way this ..uh...story? is a bit too sachharine for me.