Yeees. Pokemon Movie with Gary in it. He was in the beginning but like really? Strong trainers were invited and he didn’t come?

Kissing was fine where it ended.

That last part made me so giddy-like!
Finally! Some romance!
I can't wait to read the others on these two! Awesome job! :D

Man, poor everybody!
But where the heck is the romance?!
Honestly, I think there may not be any!
And the next one is the finale!
Uh oh. . . .

You captured Gary perfectly!
I wished they let him in the movie, then we get to see him and Ash argue all the time. I love their rivalry! XD
I can't wait to see some romance, if it happens during this adventure!

Again, great job with this story!
I wished they would have done this instead! But, oh well.
This is getting good! :D

About time someone fixed the mistake they made with this movie!
I mean, this idea got me hooked right from the start!
I can't wait to read this fully! Thank you! :D

Aww that's adorable! I always wished that Mewtwo didn't erase the trainers' memories but whatever. It's beautiful!

Reading this almost made me cry on the scene where Ash dies. It's been so long I haven't watched this movie and reading it brings back all the memories of the scenes. It was so sad yet beautiful :')

I loved this story and the couple too. You're a very good writer and it was awesome. I agree, there shouldn't be a sex scene (mainly because of their age) but also because it wouldn't fit in the story (in my opinion).

This was absolutely... PERFECT! And exactly how the movie should've been written in my opinion! I thoroughly enjoyed this work! :)

The last words...

Very emotional and deep, I like that movie too!

THIS IS HOW THE MOVIE SHOULD HAVE BEEN! THis was beyond amazing... So well written and that kiss scene after Ash was brought back to life... I almost cried.. So..cute... There's nothing more I can say.. This is sooo amazzzziiinnnnggg

OHMYGOD! This was an awesome story! I have to agree, a sex scene wouldn't have felt right in there. Though alot of people, (including me ;P!), would have loved to read one! My younger brother had this movie for VCR, and he gave it to me, since it's my favorite Poke'mon movie! Everytime I put it in, I end up watching the part where Ash dies and comes back to life, over and over again! *sniff* So sad, but so touching...! Anyways, loved the story! If you've heard of Poke'mon the Movie 3 with Entei, or the one with Celebi, (forgot the name... -_-), you should make those into stories like this, with AshxGary. I'm sure you could fit in a sex scene in the one with Celebi. I'm such a perv.! Hope you like my review, take my idea's to thought! Bye

AWWW!

I wish this was how the movie actually went! (Though 4Kids would have never put the kissing or anything, I just wish Gary had been in the movie. It would have been so much better! *o*)

Anyway, I loved this story, it was beautiful and amazing, and Gary's appearances flowed perfectly through what I remembered from the plot. Awesome writing, and I hope I see your novel someday! :)

-Charmy

That's it.

I love you. You are amazing. This takes a lot of dedication and it turned out very well! You're ability to write things that make me fangirl like no tomorrow is astounding. Lately I haven't been able to find good fanfiction, but today I made a great discovery and I thank you so much! -

That last chapter... I just can't. I was giggling and squeeing so much I literally had to stop reading for a while in order to regain my composure... only to lose it again three seconds later. xD

I think that anyone who doesn't like this is silly.

you...are...amazing i love it at first i was a little wary of how you were using most of the movie but the more i read the more i loved. i also watched the movie as i read to make the experience more fuller. meaning i could hear the characters voices as i read. again love the way you used the story and tied in gary please continue to write. :)