Loved it! Great characterization and insight to their relationship :) Great work, keep it up!

Lovely Nemu one-shot, I love this character and Mayuri,even thou Mayuri is so cruel to her I can't help but admire her for holding such incredible daughter love and adorration for her insane "father".

A little overdone (not really) as you think it may be, but nonetheless, this was a really interesting take on Nemu's "birth".

There really aren't much Mayuri and Nemu fanfics going around. You should write more! O: