Reviews for Fated to Pretend |
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MadDelight chapter 3 . 1/2/2011 "pretend im a boy" very funny galinda. you may be slightly drunk but everybody knows you wanted to jump your poor defenseless roommate. ahem. great stuff! the ending always gets me : "Did you feel anything?" Galinda wondered. It stirred. It seethed and it twisted with unrest and wanting, until Elphaba swallowed it down, shook her head, and feigned composure. "No," Elphaba said in even tones that did not betray the stirring, "I didn't feel a thing." |
secretnumber-486 chapter 3 . 9/9/2009 Please keep going? Your writing style is lovely, and your characterization is spot on. Please...? |
ScaramoucheFigaro17 chapter 3 . 5/3/2009 PLEASE! Continue this story! Please, please, please! I love it! Please write more! Please update as soon as possible! PLEASE! |
Rae Nightling chapter 3 . 1/27/2009 huh this could get interesting. i cant wait to read more of it. please update soon |
MissBonhamCartersPoppet chapter 3 . 1/26/2009 SQUEE! I love you! You're such an amazing writer, so believable and in character and subtle. You've captured Galinda so well. Thank you! |
Kirra White Tigress chapter 3 . 1/22/2009 Oh my Oz, this is so wonderful! Please, please, PLEASE, you have GOT to update this as soon as possible! :D Your Elphie sounds so realistic to me. And that last line... it's heart-breaking. It's gonna completely shatter Galinda, I can tell already. Excellent work! _ -Kirra |
AuntieElphie chapter 3 . 1/19/2009 Didn't feel a thing! Oh dear! |
vbbaby818 chapter 3 . 1/18/2009 ah! Elphie why would you lie like that! Update soon I want to see where this goes. D |
TheWarrior12 chapter 3 . 1/18/2009 Elphaba is so lying about not feeling a thing! Loved this line...Galinda drew a tube of lipstick from her cleavage and removed the cap with her teeth. “Open your mouth,” Anyway great job and I hope for more of this! |