This is a awesome story.

Beautiful story so far. I really like your writing. It doesn't use much dialogue but Cloud's actions and thoughts are pretty much enough to tell us what's going on and keep us curious and interested.

I know it's been a long time but I hope you update soon.

Drumroll! That was intense! I really really want to find out what happens next. Please don't abandon this fic, please?

And they meet again! I got a little confused over the part where there's the little girl. Was he actually helping her find Red or was that his daydreaming?

This is so good! The suspense is killing me! So she isbeing hunted down. I wonder if she was following him thus enabling her to find and return the wallet?

Oh wow! What has she been getting herself into. Maybe a rebel against the government? Someone who's trying to survive on the streets? I wonder why she wants him to stop helping her though?

Dark and angsty but I like it! Looking forward to seeing where this leads to. Good job with the descriptions and with the' tone' of cool detachment from Cloud's POV.

Love the silent understanding between the two.

Nice bit there with Lady Luck. It was a twist of dark humour me thinks.

Eek! What does it all mean?

I, too, would like to know why.

Ooooh, the suspense !

Very, very interesting story like the rest of your stories! I can't wait until you update this one. :)

I love reading this story. Cloud's character is so badass in a 'i was born in the slums' kinda way lol. He does what he can to survive and he tries to stay ahead of the game or at least try to know what he should look out for. I love the mystery too, and the fact that you're not rushing his relationship with tifa. I think you're doing a great job.

This is so interesting. I like the subtle tone, the angst in your words that is just barely there captivates a girl hungry-for-light-angst-but-has-an-insane-amount-of-trouble-finding-some.

I love the fact Cloud and Mystery Girl cannot be separated after an encounter that should have meant nothing. _

Thank you, pleez keep updating!

-Kailla )